Nightmares (clean version)
Studio: piotrtheman
Review Count: 16
Average Rating: 4.69 stars
Genre: Action
Length: 7 minutes 40 seconds
Posted on: January 31, 2008
Film Description
My better version of my movie Nightmares that was ranked 5th in action and 12th in overall!

With no sound bugs!!!!!!


Active_studios_..Police officer
Disney2000 studios...Evil man

Thanks to JetcityWoman who helped me with the script!!

Tropical hotel bedroom by Dr. House

Music from 8eyedbaby

Sound effects by
- Disney2000

Very nice film.maybe there was a few weird stuff such as the thing about he knew it was the cop outside.How could he knew that?
I`m also praising it for the VO,and of course,the voice of me!

Posted on March 8, 2008
- Toadflax

I enjoyed this movie. I didn't see a thing wrong with the VO's. Very nice work.

Posted on March 4, 2008
- julianallees

Well done, piortheman, a great performance and overall result of your hard work.

This film, really was fun making and I enjoyed every minute of it, well done and I hope you get your well earned success, lol, well done.



4th February, 2008 5:38pm

Posted on February 4, 2008
- jazzx

Several holes in this one - the acting was not too convincing in many places.

But the writing is where it really fell down:


"Oh no! It's the police!"

When there's no way he could know who's behind the door.

The sudden way the cop seemed to believe the hero's story just didn't ring true either.

If the hero admits to a cop that he "dreamt" all of the homicides he's suspected of committing, a cop would surely mark him down as a mental case murderer and arrest him immediately. He wouldn't suddenly believe his story without any corroborating evidence. I just found most of the dialogue in the second half to be completely unbelievable. With good acting you can sometimes get away with that, but it wasn't strong enough to save this script.

Good music early on in the film though.

Lol - "Shot!? With a gun!?"

No - with a banana. This script needed a serious facelift.

Posted on February 1, 2008
- gillyboy

That was better the VOs were a little off putting in the previous version but still a great movie.


Posted on February 1, 2008
- OlliEntertainment

An excellent movie..
Good work...

Film on!!!

Posted on February 1, 2008
- BiggsTrek

That came out pretty good! The VOs were nice, the story is interesting. It could have been a little "tighter" (pacing), but otherwise pretty darn cool.

Well done!

Posted on February 1, 2008
- Chris62

Please rate fast thanks.

Posted on January 31, 2008
- vikinghillblly

Good. You nailed the VOs this time. Why you're getting 4's now and not before I don't understand.

Posted on January 31, 2008
- ah77

Good story, keeps you watching.Like your VO's too. Keep up the good work.

Posted on January 31, 2008
- Victaa

Ah, very good, looking forward to the next one. The story is very interesting and mysterious. VO were good too.
If you have time, check out one of mine, thanks.

Posted on January 31, 2008
- Active_Studios

This is even more better than your other one, I'm glad you decided to remake it and make it more better, good job.
Good going with the music.
I keep moaning about me thinking I did not do well with the VO's but if your thinking it's alright, I believe you.
Well done.
5 stars from me and 50 stars from TMO and also this time 10/10.
Again, I'm going 2 BOOKMARK this movie and I already BOOKMARKED your studio.


Posted on January 31, 2008
- DJDanny

Much Better!!! 5 Stars from TMO & 50 Stars from M&MP. Excellent Work.

Posted on January 31, 2008
- PirateNinja

Good film mate. Neat voice acting. Well done!

Posted on January 31, 2008
- lastel

nice movie, good story line

Posted on January 31, 2008
- derbyrams

Glad to see ya re-release this dude. The sound-bug was quite annoying in the original export you did, but i can't say it killed the movie or anything like that as it was of an extremely high standard nonetheless and the sound delay could of been a hell of a lot worse. It wasn't like that at all, not even close.
Great to see ya get rid of the dreaded sound-bug! YAY!
Excellent movie! Loved it!!! Keep up the great work dude!
I am really hyper about checking out your upcoming projects! BOOYAH! Oh yeah!

Posted on January 31, 2008