clean - day one
 
 
Studio: bezzer36
 
Review Count: 21
Average Rating: 4.95 stars
Genre: Action
Length: 7 minutes 43 seconds
 
Posted on: November 17, 2007
 
 
Film Description
Ok, here it is???CLEAN ??? DAY 1.

This is kind of an experiment for me.
Firstly, it???s my first ever lead VO role???I wanted to try this to see if I could cut it.
Any comments, good or bad would be most appreciated.

It???s also my first dabble at various effects (mainly titles and stills) and at a different genre, this being more of an action drama???though still violent and dark.

Anyway, here???s the low-down.

This is the first part of an ongoing series.
Emilio 'Troy' Troyan has suffered a troubled past...dirty echoes haunt him...plague him...torment him...nothing is 'clean'.
But all that is about to change...


CLEAN ??? DAY ONE

Bezzer ??? Emilio ???Troy??? Troyan
GoofParade ??? Robert Muldoon

Music by Bezzer
Directed by Bezzer

Mods and visuals: 6HM, DorianRust, RikVargard, Walvince,
Bezzer, Lizard and Temple.

If I???ve missed anyone, please let me know and you shall be credited here.

Thanks as always for your great support.

Enjoy

WARNING: CONTAINS STRONG LANGUAGE AND VIOLENCE.
IF OFFENDED, PLEASE DON'T WATCH!
 
Featured Reviews
- josephkw

What a wonderful intro to what I hope will be a long series (or mini-series). The voice performances were terrific; this is the scariest I've heard Bezzer yet, and of course Goofparade was incredible as usual. The music was not the cliched quasi-Bond tunes usually associated with these types of films, and fit the scenes nicely.

Plotwise, this relatively short first installment lays out both the background of the storyline, and provides a tantalizing hint of things to come. It provides the motivation of the protagonist, as well as a sympathetic note for the audience to tune into. Nicely done.

The camerawork and editing was definitely more avant garde than the usual fare, but I felt it worked nicely to enhance the viewing experience instead of being distracting. The opening scene's cuts between him sitting and practicing with his firearm indicates what he is pre-occupied with during his waking hours--and reveals him as a man obsessed. The ending with the multi-hued overlay static shots reminded me of the blinding illumination of the flash of a gun muzzle (I did think perhaps flashing these shots in unison with the sound of a gun blast may provide even more impact to that sequence).

All in all this was a fun peek into Bezzer's newest and hottest film series. The experimental elements were a success, and we're ready and waiting for more to come. I also believe TMO has just found its newest leading man.

Posted on November 17, 2007
- goofparade

Clean Day 1 worked well for me for 2 reasons: It was focused and well paced,
and the writing and dialogue were direct and delivered nicely.
Day 1...I like that concept.. this is a mission in a short time period.. what will happen on day 2 or 10? I wonder if Troy "cleans" everyday?

Your original music was very nice in this Bez, and your voice role was well performed, mysterious, and with a good accent too.


Bring on day 2...

gp

Posted on November 17, 2007
- sisch

Wow! Ah Bezzer, you will soon be swamped by voiceover requests, I'm sure!
Both you and GP did great, and I loved the somewhat mellow music in combination with the violence - worked just great, and the end sounded almost like a poem to me! Great cam work, too, and I like the opening titles and the somewhat psychedelic overlays in the movie.
I'm glad you're back into movie making, and look forward to next part of the series!

Posted on November 17, 2007
 
Reviews
- userjosh9874

Well, I finally got my speakers fixed! I was finally able to watch this movie- and it didn't disappoint! ;)

This is probably the most intense interrogation sequence I've ever seen on TMO! The characters were great, the story was intriguing, and all technical aspects were up to par! Your VO's were a little quiet, but they were still fantastic! I can't wait for day 2! Be sure to notify me of it's release!

Posted on December 5, 2007
- nukester

Bezzer returns to TMO with a smash hit and what promises to be a highly successful series. Day One gets the motions going as we are introduced to an interesting story. The VA's performed terrificly and you really managed to stand well amongst all others.

Overall "Clean - Day One" is a remarkable story that can only get better! so until next time..

Nuke Well in Day One!!!

Posted on December 3, 2007
- trewill7

Did Mr. Troyan ever consider taking a shower?

An Excellently Delightful film you've crafted here. Very small in it's scope, for now, i assume, as I know the story will continue and evolve into something far more epic; and that's what i'm looking forward to.

Writing, editing, music, free-cam, all top-notch.

The highlight for me, you ask? Why you of course; and your excellent VO work. GP is a given, he always delivers on his performances, but this is the first time I've heard you, and WOW!

I really enjoyed this flick, can't wait to see it continued.

Excellent work!

-tre

Posted on November 19, 2007
- thebiz

An excellent beginning to a tale of vengeance similar in vein to the Death Wish series (but closer in style and effectiveness to Death Wish 1 only). Theres some really great kickass lines here and the music pulls its weight really adding a dose of the cool to the proceedings. Credits and title song worked very well. Love the angel with the gun visuals. Great beginning. I look forward to more.

Posted on November 18, 2007
- kwistufa

This is a great start to what looks to be
a very interesting Series.
Great use of scenes & Backdrops.
Music worked well.
Really liked the VO's..!!
You've done an awesome job Bezzer.
Goof is always great as well.
You both really captured your Characters well.
Well I'm hooked on this great New Series,
can't wait to see the next dirty debt Cleaned up!

Posted on November 18, 2007
- BouncyFrog

why are there so many great series around at the minute? And now Clean is adding to that! Can't wait to see the next part!

Posted on November 18, 2007
- pookashells

Wow! That was great! I really liked the music in the beginning, it set a great tone for the scene. The dialogue was very realistic, as in movie realistic, something a hollywood writer would conceive. VOs were also stunning, you did a great job, I wuldn't have guessed it was your first time VOing as lead role. I really liked the death sequence, it was something out of the ordinary TMO death.

This was a great beginning to a series, I can't wait to see more. :-)

Posted on November 18, 2007
- K4ownzall

Bezzer.... Welcome to the World of VOing! As you've just experienced, it is alot of work... and I can tell you did some great work in this new movie! Coupled with Goofparade, you two made a great team here! You successfully created an appropriate atmosphere for your movie. If I could suggest, ease up on the 'f' bombs. You don't need them. Your voice alone carried the connotations perfectly! ===K4===

Posted on November 18, 2007
- derbyrams

Excellent! Bezzer is back! YAY! Oh yeah!!! Great movie btw.
What a way to come back! I loved it. Excellent cast.
Goofparade and yourself were magnificent in your roles.
I loved the dialogue. Felt so real and not cheesy or anything at all.
It was directed so well that it felt like a real movie! Congrats on that.
I loved the little bits of set-dressings and the sets you used.
They made the movie look very neat and cool indeed!
The music added so much to the movie, so well done. Music is one of the most important things in a movie. It can make or break it. Here, it made it and more!
Very nice intro to what looks to be an interesting series.
Really looking forward to the turn-out in the installments to come.
Overall: Very well done intro to a series. Was very enjoyable and exciting.
Everything was top notch here, the music, editing, vo's, set-dressing, sets and much more!!!!
Highly recommended movie and Two big thumbs up! Top job!

Posted on November 18, 2007
- Primaer

Great intro in an hopefully very exciting new series. I think the death overlays didn't fit in the movie, but other than that, this was a great watch. Two great VAs, nice music and good camera angles combined with an interesting plot and good written dialogues. Now it's time to wait for Day Two(?)!

Posted on November 18, 2007
- TheFlyingDuDe-Films

Great start into a new series. I like all the details you gave us about the background and the well written dialogs. Also the voice acting was great by both gp and you! Very well done I`m looking forward to see the second day. =)

Posted on November 18, 2007
- ubernewbie

No comment

Posted on November 18, 2007
- josephkw

What a wonderful intro to what I hope will be a long series (or mini-series). The voice performances were terrific; this is the scariest I've heard Bezzer yet, and of course Goofparade was incredible as usual. The music was not the cliched quasi-Bond tunes usually associated with these types of films, and fit the scenes nicely.

Plotwise, this relatively short first installment lays out both the background of the storyline, and provides a tantalizing hint of things to come. It provides the motivation of the protagonist, as well as a sympathetic note for the audience to tune into. Nicely done.

The camerawork and editing was definitely more avant garde than the usual fare, but I felt it worked nicely to enhance the viewing experience instead of being distracting. The opening scene's cuts between him sitting and practicing with his firearm indicates what he is pre-occupied with during his waking hours--and reveals him as a man obsessed. The ending with the multi-hued overlay static shots reminded me of the blinding illumination of the flash of a gun muzzle (I did think perhaps flashing these shots in unison with the sound of a gun blast may provide even more impact to that sequence).

All in all this was a fun peek into Bezzer's newest and hottest film series. The experimental elements were a success, and we're ready and waiting for more to come. I also believe TMO has just found its newest leading man.

Posted on November 17, 2007
- goofparade

Clean Day 1 worked well for me for 2 reasons: It was focused and well paced,
and the writing and dialogue were direct and delivered nicely.
Day 1...I like that concept.. this is a mission in a short time period.. what will happen on day 2 or 10? I wonder if Troy "cleans" everyday?

Your original music was very nice in this Bez, and your voice role was well performed, mysterious, and with a good accent too.


Bring on day 2...

gp

Posted on November 17, 2007
- insanewarrior69

this is by far one of the series i will always follow. there is an even deeper story behind the main plot. and that in itself is truly amazing. bits and peices unfold but man it left me wanting more.

Posted on November 17, 2007
- YamiMarik

Great first episode Bezzer! This was better than I expected! Its nice to see somebody come back to film making because you make great films. The story was awesome, I love how you introduced the characters and told a little bit of a back story behind Emilio. You did a great job as the lead role, loved the VO's. You and Goof did a wonderful job. Music was good and it just went with every scene. I loved the opening titles. Dialogue was written very well. Freecam was good and nice job at editing the scenes when they talked. It had some nice cool violence in the end and amazing blood stills. I hope I can make it in one episode someday. Great episode and I am looking forward to the next.

Posted on November 17, 2007
- dnr

Great Job Bezzer great introduction to the main charecter.love the story. Can't ait to see what adventures await

Posted on November 17, 2007
- sisch

Wow! Ah Bezzer, you will soon be swamped by voiceover requests, I'm sure!
Both you and GP did great, and I loved the somewhat mellow music in combination with the violence - worked just great, and the end sounded almost like a poem to me! Great cam work, too, and I like the opening titles and the somewhat psychedelic overlays in the movie.
I'm glad you're back into movie making, and look forward to next part of the series!

Posted on November 17, 2007
- casserik

My review
Plot 3/5
Script 4/5
Music Choice 3/5
Overall 4/5

It was a good episode. I thought some of the dialogue was pretty strange and far fetched, but I will give you a four star rating. Good job.

Posted on November 17, 2007
- TENCHIMUYO

That was really good
Is it a tv series or movie part series?
This movie was like "V for Vendetta" have u seen it?

Anyway good mods and the backgorund works were pure aswell with the wrtting!!!
CAn you rate my movie and give me your best opioion

Posted on November 17, 2007
- nukestress

Wow! I wasn't expecting this one! I enjoyed this and I'm glad you've returned back to film making! I'm looking forward to more from you, until then...

Nuke Well in Day One!

Posted on November 17, 2007