Studio: Neroxc
Review Count: 1
Average Rating: 4.0 stars
Genre: Action
Length: 8 minutes 49 seconds
Posted on: October 6, 2007
- TheFlyingDuDe-Films

First of all let me say you are a marvellous director, the cam angles and the effects and overlays were fantastic! But you lost the star at the editing and the story. I couldn´t finish reading the letters and text at the beginning because it wasn`t long enough on the screen and in the text I read were a spellign error... but that`s not that bad, I belive I also made enough in my review :D. The second thing I have to mention is the story, the message you wanted to tell us was clear after the first minute, after that you just made it a little clearer with the little story, but the story was quiet boring with vo`s and cut a bit shorter it would have been much more effectiv!

Don´t get all this wrong you are a marvellous director, just make sure your overlays are long enough up so everyone can read them make sure you turn off mumbling the next film. =)

Posted on October 6, 2007