Sins trailer
 
 
Studio: sparky1512
 
Review Count: 41
Average Rating: 4.63 stars
Genre: Horror
Length: 1 minutes 27 seconds
 
Posted on: June 17, 2007
 
 
Film Description
Welcome to the second trailer for SINS ??? I can???t promise you???ll discover much more about the plot of the movie but you should get a much better feel of what it???s ???about???

Michael Grayson is an ordinary man who, in a moment of weakness, has an affair. The affair was to be kept a close secret.......but someone found out. With the lives of his friends and family at stake, Michael must appease the would be blackmailer in the hopes that his SINS will be forgiven.

Starring :-

JOSPEHKW ??? FATHER LUCIAN
SISCH ??? JENNA GRAYSON
LAURAJSOFFE ??? LAURA TAYLOR
SNAKEEATER42 ??? NEWSREADER / POLICEMAN
(AND ME) ??? MICHAEL GRAYSON

Poster by the very tallented FREDTHEDUCK
trailer thread - http://allboards.lionhead.com/showthread.php?t=213627

Music by Aura_Noctis track title Esteril_eden used with permission from music.download.com and reign of darkness by Conscious Automation used with permission from Newgrounds


Look out for the final finished movie in July 2007 !!
 
Featured Reviews
- OD-Ork-Boy

The GOOD:
A trailer which is made of pure awsome! This trailer pokes it's head out and yells "WATCH THE FULL VERSION!" , just like The Dead Cases or The Deed of Midnight's trailers do. Trailers are a good sign of what the movie will be like, and I must say this has gotten me PSYCHED for the full version! Very well done!

The BAD:
Lyrics during VO scenes - Bad idea. That's the only thing I could find wrong with this.

- Orky

P.S - I totally agree with Trewill on that, you could make a killing with that quote ;P.

Posted on June 27, 2007
- tigereyes

Good trailer. I rate trailers on a 4 star system, because it isn't a film. However, when going into the film, let me give some quick advice.

Take all of your audio in Audacity and equalize it, or, make it sound the same relative volume. In this trailer at least, the music diluted the voice overs and drowned them out in a loud burst of noise. I think that the voices I could hear were top notch, and the combustion of the trailer was great.

The overlay effect where it soft of pans around to the overlay provides an interesting break from the norm, always important in a film. When the film is released, I advise running it in multiple audio volumes as tests [before upload] so that you can make sure it has relative volume that is the same. Thus, when the film is uploaded, people can hear everything. Don't be afraid to tune up voice overs, or tune down music, fiddling with audio is what gives it crispe perfection.

-tiger

Posted on June 21, 2007
- JosephKw

More than a taste of things to come, you actually gave us a little nibble here. Very tantalizing teaser with some great lines (gotta say that last one put a smile on my face for some reason). Looking forward to the real deal.

Posted on June 19, 2007
- jase180

That line about "give my regards to Satan on your way to Hell" made me think of "Tonight, We dine in Hell, tomorrow, I'm thinking Arbys" I dunno why. Im kinda goofy that way.

A nicely done teaser that sets the stage for a interesting tale of blackmail and revenge. VO's are solid, but the music overwhelms the performances, and drowns out alot of what I suspect is good dialog with important plot points. The key to any teaser is making the audience want more, and I'm curious about the film, as it sounds like a powerful drama and solid character study.

I like the plot, and the potential for a good story, just be careful of the wall to wall sound trap. Sometimes, less is more, and in films like this silence in key moments can be much more effective. Based on the teaser, I think your are loading up for a heavy character driven film.

Nice Titles, nice free cam work. I liked the dollyshots, and the low up the stairs pov shot. Nicely done. The cards carry along nicely to keep up up to speed and I think over all, this did its job and made me want to see it all the way through.

Cheers my friend,

5 stars for a solid teaser and what looks to be a nice and heavy dramatic thriller.

Posted on June 17, 2007
- trewill7

Great Work! Honestly, you should coin that quote at the end, and start a line of T-shirts. I mean seriously, who wouldn't buy a shirt that said "Give my reguards to Satan, on your way to HELL!"?, i know i would buy one.

Posted on June 17, 2007
 
Reviews
- BamRyan

Awesome trailer!

Posted on July 31, 2007
- Meosha12

WOW EXCELLENT TRAILER CAN'T WAIT





PS I UPLOADED A TEST MOVIE CHECK IT OUT

Posted on July 4, 2007
- OD-Ork-Boy

The GOOD:
A trailer which is made of pure awsome! This trailer pokes it's head out and yells "WATCH THE FULL VERSION!" , just like The Dead Cases or The Deed of Midnight's trailers do. Trailers are a good sign of what the movie will be like, and I must say this has gotten me PSYCHED for the full version! Very well done!

The BAD:
Lyrics during VO scenes - Bad idea. That's the only thing I could find wrong with this.

- Orky

P.S - I totally agree with Trewill on that, you could make a killing with that quote ;P.

Posted on June 27, 2007
- waroftheworlds01

Looks like itsgoing to be a great movie.

Posted on June 27, 2007
- ShyShy

Great Trialer!
PM me when the real deal comes out!
Looks super super duper scary!!!! Film ON!!!!

Please rate MASSACRE and get 500 VC!
http://movies.lionhead.com/movie/135748
Thanks

Drizz Productions

Posted on June 26, 2007
- Zarrmida

It`s good.

Posted on June 25, 2007
- Matthew999

Great!
Greysword get a life.

Posted on June 21, 2007
- tigereyes

Good trailer. I rate trailers on a 4 star system, because it isn't a film. However, when going into the film, let me give some quick advice.

Take all of your audio in Audacity and equalize it, or, make it sound the same relative volume. In this trailer at least, the music diluted the voice overs and drowned them out in a loud burst of noise. I think that the voices I could hear were top notch, and the combustion of the trailer was great.

The overlay effect where it soft of pans around to the overlay provides an interesting break from the norm, always important in a film. When the film is released, I advise running it in multiple audio volumes as tests [before upload] so that you can make sure it has relative volume that is the same. Thus, when the film is uploaded, people can hear everything. Don't be afraid to tune up voice overs, or tune down music, fiddling with audio is what gives it crispe perfection.

-tiger

Posted on June 21, 2007
- Greysword

Great Appsolutly great.i like horror films a lot and this is the better horror film i have ever seen.can you send me an email when you finish the movie.please.pao-kostas@hotmail.com

Posted on June 21, 2007
- TheFlyingDuDe-Films

a promising trailer!
looking foward to the movie! =)

Posted on June 21, 2007
- DoubleMPee

Good Vo`s, good music and nice cut! Looks promising to me. 4 stars because it`s a trailer.

Good luck!!!

Greeeetzzz,

DoubleMPee.

Posted on June 20, 2007
- bleedblack

Excellent trailer. The actual movie should be very good.

Posted on June 20, 2007
- SnakeEater42

Awesome trailer VOs were good and it has left me enticed. I can't wait to see this.

Posted on June 20, 2007
- chrisu69

Excellent trailer,I look forward to the movie!

Posted on June 20, 2007
- kell1608

Cool Trailer!

Posted on June 20, 2007
- Adam-Cayir-Pictures

wow that looks great cant wait to see the movie come out

Posted on June 20, 2007
- JMMartin

Cant wait to see the movie. The voice acting was simply out of this world

Posted on June 20, 2007
- claw21

"i know what you did to her" dont know why, but i get the feeling that i have seen a movie or a film with a similar plot, but just cant put my mind to which film it was, but anyway it was a pretty good teaser.

Posted on June 20, 2007
- OlliEntertainment

Cool trailer...
Good job...

Film on!!!

Posted on June 20, 2007
- RJANACONDA

Pretty good

Good
a decent trailer what i have to say i liked the most was the camera work the plot premise form what i gather seems like it can make a great film.

Bad
nothing really sticks out from this trailer to me although it doses a good job peeking interest i feel i will forget about this film soon when the purpose of a trailer is to stick in the mind until the full version comes out. music did not suggest horror to me.

Posted on June 19, 2007
- JosephKw

More than a taste of things to come, you actually gave us a little nibble here. Very tantalizing teaser with some great lines (gotta say that last one put a smile on my face for some reason). Looking forward to the real deal.

Posted on June 19, 2007
- AxeCinema

A few things, 1) Never, ever, use vocal music during a Voice-over.
2)Never force cameras thrugh walls! you wouldn't do it to a camera man would you?

and 3) that was pretty good!

you've done well, just watch out for 1 and 2, and always remember, static is your friend, and you will do great with this movie! :-)

Posted on June 19, 2007
- norriefpb

It does what it says on the tin, makes me want to see the finished film. Great cast you've got there and loved Aura_Noctis, very atmospheric. Looking forward to this one.

Norrie

Posted on June 19, 2007
- derbyrams

Another excellent trailer dude. I loved it, this movie definelty looks like something very special and I can't wait!!!! The cast sounds top notch!!!!
This will be something very big on TMO!!! Excellent music. Loved this short trailer. Very good work dude. Sweet!!!!!

Posted on June 18, 2007
- Neroxc

Everything a Trailer should have, Just tease us, with just enough information.

The music fitted perfectly, and the VO's were clear.

All in All a great trailer and we look forward to the final movie.

Posted on June 18, 2007
- Howitzer

Great trailer, really brought out the atmosphere of the movie. Nice use of soundbites with excelent voice acting. Looking forward to the full movie!

Posted on June 18, 2007
- Mark1212

Loved it, gave us little plot info, but a brief intro to how the story will be...
Great VOs, music, visuals... Well done :)

Posted on June 18, 2007
- Rik_Vargard

Hohohuhuh..... It's been a while since I watched such a great trailer! Can't wait to see what you'll do with the whole movie... please PM me on release! :)

Posted on June 18, 2007
- Mustachio26

I really good teaser that pulled me right in. The plot is an intruiging and intereting twist on the religious thriller genre. Should be good.

Posted on June 17, 2007
- kuroken

A dark, atmospheric teaser with a nasty little tag line to it....the voice performances were excellent, though as has been mentioned, you could tone down the music a bit when people are speaking.

Liked the camera movement a whole lot - very fluid, very stylish - and I have to complement you on your Starmaker work - the characters look very good, and distinctive.

I'm definitely looking forward to this one - please toss me a PM when it comes out.

Posted on June 17, 2007
- K4OwnzAll

Nice suspense courtesy of the Voice Actors and the music. Yes, the freecam was nice. The dark sets were contributing as well to the atmosphere. ===K4===

Posted on June 17, 2007
- jase180

That line about "give my regards to Satan on your way to Hell" made me think of "Tonight, We dine in Hell, tomorrow, I'm thinking Arbys" I dunno why. Im kinda goofy that way.

A nicely done teaser that sets the stage for a interesting tale of blackmail and revenge. VO's are solid, but the music overwhelms the performances, and drowns out alot of what I suspect is good dialog with important plot points. The key to any teaser is making the audience want more, and I'm curious about the film, as it sounds like a powerful drama and solid character study.

I like the plot, and the potential for a good story, just be careful of the wall to wall sound trap. Sometimes, less is more, and in films like this silence in key moments can be much more effective. Based on the teaser, I think your are loading up for a heavy character driven film.

Nice Titles, nice free cam work. I liked the dollyshots, and the low up the stairs pov shot. Nicely done. The cards carry along nicely to keep up up to speed and I think over all, this did its job and made me want to see it all the way through.

Cheers my friend,

5 stars for a solid teaser and what looks to be a nice and heavy dramatic thriller.

Posted on June 17, 2007
- Chris62

GOOD TRAILER!
PLOT-5/5
VO'S-5/5
MUSIC-5/5
Please rate control part1.Thanks!

Posted on June 17, 2007
- Greenglades

Very good trailer.

Good plot introduction and building of intrigue and suspense. Nice musical selections to set the mood with the opening and ending. Very nice camerawork.

Looks to be a promising film.

Posted on June 17, 2007
- jakechief

Great!!!!!! I love it a lot. Your the first for my competition. Loved it. I'm putting you in the horror catagorie. :-0

Posted on June 17, 2007
- bufu0

Great VOs!!! Simply great:)
I liked the lil' teaser, good job. I'll be waitin' for this one, "Atonement is the answer?" Who knows?! :P

Cheers

Bu

Posted on June 17, 2007
- sisch

I´m looking forward to this! Nice cam work and great choice of music, and Joseph at his best!

Posted on June 17, 2007
- DNR

Great looking teaser, music was awesome and the vo's were incredible looking forward to the full production

Posted on June 17, 2007
- trewill7

Great Work! Honestly, you should coin that quote at the end, and start a line of T-shirts. I mean seriously, who wouldn't buy a shirt that said "Give my reguards to Satan, on your way to HELL!"?, i know i would buy one.

Posted on June 17, 2007
- jarvis100

Looks fantastic sparky. I can't wait to see the whole picture.

Posted on June 17, 2007
- FredTheDuck

Nice, sparky!
I'm really looking forward to this, there was some great use of freecam there, and lots to look forward to!

Again, let me ask you for a PM when this is released. ;)

Posted on June 17, 2007