Review Count: 13
Average Rating: 3.85 stars
Length: 1 minutes 50 seconds
Posted on: April 13, 2007
stillborn- (Wartime Horror/ Futuristic Thriller)
Trevor Buchanon finds himself lost after being drafted into the marine corps during the Vietnam War. He becomes so delusional that his memories of his long lost love begin to fade away as he is offered a curious proposition from a mysterious tempter.
-Written and directed by otnemem20.
-Starring otnemem20, P-ROBthePretentious, Warpatrelli, and RonnieRedbeard.
-Music recorded by RonnieRedbeard.
COMING IN MAY 2007
I quote from your description:
"Original music recorded by RonnieRedbeard"
Erm, it's not original. Leonard Cohen wrote it, and first performed it on the 1968 album "Songs From A Room".
Flagged for plagiarism.
Posted on April 29, 2007
A decent trailer.
First things first: The music was good. It fit with the events shown and everything else sound-wise, that is--- no sound at all--- was good for this trailer. The free cam was good, but to a certain point.
I didn't like that at some points, the camera would start stuck behind a tree or object, taking away from the scene and experience. Also, the trialer was to vague to actually captivate someone to watch it. It gives little information about the plot, and what was with the skulls?
Overall, it was good. Ill watch for your movie in the future.
Posted on April 26, 2007
I don't give out detailed reviews for trailers, but I can give constructive advice for making an effective trailer.
I like the way this was put together, good free-cam, editing etc... but no narration meant that I had no idea what the movie is about. I deliberately didn't read the description until the end and then it kind of clicked. Without reading the description, viewers are supposed to know what the film is about. Visuals aren't the only ingredient that make a trailer, it's also the plot-line that builds anticipation.
Great job with the visuals and it looks promising, but as a trailer it was missing half of the necessary ingredients.
Posted on April 25, 2007
Not bad. Nice prop setup. The hanging skulls look good.
One thing -- your description says marine core......It's Marine Corps.
Posted on April 24, 2007
Love the idea
great camera shots
whats with the space suits
I really love the horror factor behind this upcoming movie ...but the question is ...will it live up to the hipe?
Posted on April 14, 2007
A good Trailer but i can not understand the flying skulls. The Music was very good and i pleasend on the movie publish. Sorry for my english ;-)
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Posted on April 13, 2007