Life in the Future WARP SPACE 14
Review Count: 3
Average Rating: 3.67 stars
Length: 8 minutes 12 seconds
Posted on: March 27, 2007
this episode marks the beginning of a new season and new chapter.this takes place after the events with jane donald being eveil and almost taking over the world,but rex defeating her with the cost of his life.one thousand years has passed and the year is 4000.the start of a new year means a start of a new crew.especially since new evil has risen,that could destroy the universe.dark vader.now,join dallas and her crew as they form up and stop the forces of evil..namely dark vader.
I enjoyed this film, though I believe it could use alot of work. The story was good,that's what I liked about it so much. What hurts the film is the technical aspect I think.
-The subtitles ran to fast, there were many times where I had to rewind just to see what was said. and the way you attributed the dialogue to each character made it a little confusing at times. the best way to do a subtitle is to use the name of the character speaking before each character speaking before their dialogue. like ( Dallas: Hi commander how are you?) and you're going to want to lengthen the subtitle time in post production to make it easier to read.
-Editing could use some work too. Post production is great for this. Cut the scenes up and use only what you need and nothing more. There were times where two people were speaking and there was no subtitles for either so they were just standing around doing nothing. if you lengthen the subs and cut some of the excess scene out it'll make the film flow better.
-I thought you did a pretty good job overall of using in game music to set the emotion of the film. I really liked what you did there except for maybe the final piece of music which did seem a little about of place for the action going on.
I hope you don't think I'm trying to down the film. I'm rating it honestly and am trying to give you the best advice I can. You also may want to talk to some of the other filmmakers of TMO about their techniques to get a feel for several different approaches to making movies.
I think you have a great story here. like I said I think the film could use some technical work. I can see your passion for this series in the effort you have put into it and I think with some extra polish on it YOU COULD HAVE SOMETHING VERY SPECIAL HERE.
Posted on April 12, 2007
I am shocked, this film is amazing! I don't care what MovieReviewerInc says, but this film, I like it, even my brother which is here next to me thinks you deserve 5 stars! Awesome!
I give points to the PLOT, CHARACTERS, CAMERA USE, MUSIC and EFFORT.
I give points as
-A -Very Good
-D -Not bad
-PLOT - A+
-CHARACTERS - A+
-CAMERA USE - A+
-MUSIC - B
-EFFORT �?? A
Good luck in future!
Could you watch and review this trailer of mine, it's only 1 mins 10 secs:
THE QUEST (Trailer) http://movies.lionhead.com/movie/129810
I would really appreciate it! Thanks if you can!
Posted on April 11, 2007