The laugh
 
 
Studio: ZCK_legend
 
Review Count: 42
Average Rating: 4.76 stars
Genre: Horror
Length: 11 minutes 7 seconds
 
Posted on: March 12, 2007
 
 
Film Description
Hitting 1st place in the horror charts and nomanated in the newbie awards


Halloween night.anything can happen. love,Scandel,and even murder.
staring Hannah Kepley as the Voice of Lauren Lee and Elliot sliger Voicing himself and me ZCK_legend voicing himself as Zach

Elliot has a plan for tonight.to get rid of zach so that he may move in on lauren(Zachs Girlfriend).so he hires someone to do the job. but lauren ess the whole thing. she sees her boyfriend being murdered by a man(Hitman aka MefuneAkira)
.she slips into a deep depresion and starts to see things. but is Zach really dead?


theres a creepy twist to the ending if you can keep up
I would say this is some good editing i did.
 
Featured Reviews
- Master007

The Archaic Awards
Review

Story: 9/10 A great story! Interesting. It was different in a way. Nice way to show the friend betraying the other friend. The twist at the end was......um........ odd, but I guess it works out in a creepy sort of way. Nice job!

Music: 4/5 Music didn't really work at some parts. I felt you could have choosen a better selection of in game music.

VO/Subs: 9/10 All the vo's were excellent except Mefune. He was too quiet. Other then that ZCK did a fantastic job as well as the others.

Script: 5/5 Script was good. Some of the lines were so so, but other then that it was good.

Extras: 5/5 Good use of laugh echo and freecam. I enjoyed it!

Editing: 14/15 You had good editing. I felt the movie could have been a bit shorter though, and that the scene transition could have been a bit better. Other then that a good horror film that creeped me out!

Final Score: 46/50

Posted on March 27, 2007
- Bloodbaro950

Wow this is without a doubt one of the greatest movies on TMO. When Zack appears in the forest with the hitman that had amazingly outstanding editing and the collage of VOs of him laughing really made this movie. The whole way you did this prefect and to be honest it didn't feel like 11 minutes because you very effectivly held my attention. Plus the ending which I'm not clear on but when Zack framed his Ex making it look like she was a homicidal killer was clever or she may have really been crazy and Zack was just a conjuration of past memories and consionus that seeks revenge.....hmmm I have to think about that one. Anyway great job 5 out of 5 but If I could give more I would

Posted on March 26, 2007
- SnakeEater42

Best horror on TMO. I loved it scarriest movie I've seen on TMO. The excellent VOs were what made it so scarry, the laughing especially great work definately a masterpiece.

Posted on March 18, 2007
- Moviegoer1994

that was a really good movie!
it was kinda confusing though.
at first it made sense than it didnt when the guy came back. and then did whenhe shot the guy and then didnt at the very end.
the music was well chosen. VERY well.
i suggest a sequel so the story could end a little bit better
and the laughing scared the hell outta me!
good job!

Posted on March 18, 2007
- yoman6000

Okay. Like I have said with many other movies... There were ups adnt here were downs.The thing that is a major up is the twist at the end. Also the editing was good.
But it majorly lacked originality. It is the same plot as many other horor movies. Somene dies. They come back as a killer and kill people. Also the acting wasn't that convincing. But I will give it four star s becasue I enjoyed watching it. Plus the twist at the end was a REALLY good twist. So yea. Good movie.

Posted on March 17, 2007
- Mildheadwound

A bellyfull of teenage death in this funny & frieghtening spook tale of revenge from beyond the grave! From the creepy environs of the backwoods to the corridors of deception in the schools this story slowly unravels into an intricate and terrifying urban legend!! The ending was good n' tricky and the fx, especially the fighting, was wicked!!!

Posted on March 17, 2007
- NUKESTER

I thought you managed to apply a good deal of suspense into the film. It felt like an old 80's horror flick which isnt a bad thing as it felt nostalgic!! There were a few scenes a moments that could have been shaved off in time but other than that I thought you did a good job, the twist at the end was quite ingenious and I give you props for that, although it was a little confusing at the same time.

Overall a very good attempt in the Horror genre and I am sure you will get better and better with each new film! Congrats and looking forward to seeing more from you!

Nuke Well in all the Clowns!!!

Posted on March 17, 2007
- Awsomejohn77

The plot was amazing. Some of the voice acting was eerie, like when Zac was in the woods, Very good. Great acually. 5 Stars all the way.

Posted on March 16, 2007
- RaYdAwG

ahh the voices in my head!! Somebody make em stop!!!

dude...I'm gonna be hearing those voices in my nightmares for the next week...lol

That was a really good movie! The script was pretty good. I don't agree with your music choices you made for certain scenes, but the voices...those were awesome! The vo's, laughing, etc. Overall, a very good movie!

Posted on March 14, 2007
- howard_studio

5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 stars
i give you a big big 5!!!!!



pssst make some more of this movies ;)

Posted on March 14, 2007
 
Reviews
- lord112

Simply amazing! Probly one of the best movies I've ever seen on TMO!!!
Although that was a really DEEp twist at the end...Why would Zach kill Lauren?!
I thought she was going to live, but you made it even more exciting! The work of a seemingly true killer...kind of scares me a bit...lol
P.S)MAKE A NUMBER 2!!! totally 2 would be amazing!!!

Posted on February 29, 2008
- derbyrams

I did really enjoy this movie. The story was pretty good, i did some how find the ending a bit confusing and strange though. I thought the cast was excellent, an excellent choice. They all brought the characters to life.
I did rather like the characters in this movie as well. And I thought this was edited up to a pretty good standard.
Overall, i really enjoyed this, a very interesting story, if some-what a bit confusing at the end, i still was entertained a lot by this movie despite that one little thing. Nice effort. Also, i admit that it was quite scary.

Posted on April 14, 2007
- Alutt

Hi, very impressive voice over acting quality (except for the problem of "background noices", too bad, you had to "clean" this for better results). I found the characters very well constructed. The cutting job is well done, but maybe could it be more precise sometimes. The music selection (very common) and use (not always adapted or... just missing sometimes) are not so good, I found. Well, the story is good, interesting and... creepy (I didn't laugh much !), liked it ! My rating : 4,75.

PS : excuse my english and thanks for your visit on An african Tale :-)

Posted on April 6, 2007
- Fozz20

Good horror film, I liked the creepy laugh (well edited) although the overal film could have been scarier with some atmospheric music and sound effects. Well done.

Posted on March 29, 2007
- Master007

The Archaic Awards
Review

Story: 9/10 A great story! Interesting. It was different in a way. Nice way to show the friend betraying the other friend. The twist at the end was......um........ odd, but I guess it works out in a creepy sort of way. Nice job!

Music: 4/5 Music didn't really work at some parts. I felt you could have choosen a better selection of in game music.

VO/Subs: 9/10 All the vo's were excellent except Mefune. He was too quiet. Other then that ZCK did a fantastic job as well as the others.

Script: 5/5 Script was good. Some of the lines were so so, but other then that it was good.

Extras: 5/5 Good use of laugh echo and freecam. I enjoyed it!

Editing: 14/15 You had good editing. I felt the movie could have been a bit shorter though, and that the scene transition could have been a bit better. Other then that a good horror film that creeped me out!

Final Score: 46/50

Posted on March 27, 2007
- Bloodbaro950

Wow this is without a doubt one of the greatest movies on TMO. When Zack appears in the forest with the hitman that had amazingly outstanding editing and the collage of VOs of him laughing really made this movie. The whole way you did this prefect and to be honest it didn't feel like 11 minutes because you very effectivly held my attention. Plus the ending which I'm not clear on but when Zack framed his Ex making it look like she was a homicidal killer was clever or she may have really been crazy and Zack was just a conjuration of past memories and consionus that seeks revenge.....hmmm I have to think about that one. Anyway great job 5 out of 5 but If I could give more I would

Posted on March 26, 2007
- siclops

cool movie!!

Posted on March 24, 2007
- DuDeman117

Dude that was cool. man, i wish my movies were like that except i have trouble making movies cause all the people are black. There all black like there clothes and stuff. it sucks but at least i can see movies like yours. It was a bit dull at the end but it was cool hearin' the laugh. And also nice thumbnail that was what pulled me in.

Posted on March 21, 2007
- boneguy

that was cool

Posted on March 21, 2007
- OD-Ork-Boy

The laughing was the scariest part of the movie, truely. The twist at the end was totally unexpected and very well done. Overall a really good movie.

Posted on March 21, 2007
- George_Locust

I kept expecting Zach to ask Elliot if he wanted to play a game. This felt like the prequel to your other movies. I cant get over the laughing, dont know how you can laugh like that. Im bookmarking your studio.

Posted on March 19, 2007
- rysto

Great movie. Loved the great twist at the end. The editing sequences for the fight scenes were well done and unique! Plus the edited stalking scenes were a nice touch, adding to the tension!

Posted on March 19, 2007
- SnakeEater42

Best horror on TMO. I loved it scarriest movie I've seen on TMO. The excellent VOs were what made it so scarry, the laughing especially great work definately a masterpiece.

Posted on March 18, 2007
- Moviegoer1994

that was a really good movie!
it was kinda confusing though.
at first it made sense than it didnt when the guy came back. and then did whenhe shot the guy and then didnt at the very end.
the music was well chosen. VERY well.
i suggest a sequel so the story could end a little bit better
and the laughing scared the hell outta me!
good job!

Posted on March 18, 2007
- Eagle_93

Eagle's Reviews:
Excellent movie! You made a great work, I very liked it. Excellent VO's and great story. Overall great movie!

Posted on March 18, 2007
- liam-speed

GREAT ! but the only scary parts were the laughs man they freaked the hell outta me !

Posted on March 18, 2007
- Amabeginzordawg

Cool movie with some great voice work including the laugh section. I think you over did it a bit but it still worked very well. Very well presented and thought out. Great Job.

d0ub|e E

Posted on March 18, 2007
- yoman6000

Okay. Like I have said with many other movies... There were ups adnt here were downs.The thing that is a major up is the twist at the end. Also the editing was good.
But it majorly lacked originality. It is the same plot as many other horor movies. Somene dies. They come back as a killer and kill people. Also the acting wasn't that convincing. But I will give it four star s becasue I enjoyed watching it. Plus the twist at the end was a REALLY good twist. So yea. Good movie.

Posted on March 17, 2007
- K4OwnzAll

Everybody loves a clown! The employment of constructing multiple layers of laughter and script were very effective in creating a wonderful sense of horror and maddness! ===K4===

Posted on March 17, 2007
- Jenniza

Awesome movie!!!! I'm sooo sorry I didn't have time to do this movie; but, the VA you found for Hannah was great, as were all the VA's! You did an awesome job with the soundtrack augmentations. The story was incredible and took advantage of some great voice talents. The editing was very nicely done and shows a real gift. I'm very impressed with the overall quality of this film.

Posted on March 17, 2007
- sheldybob

WOW! that was such a brilliant film, omg i cant stop thinkin about how good it is :p. i wish i was as good as you at makin movies:( but still 5 stars all the way:D, please watch nd rate my films please.

Posted on March 17, 2007
- Mildheadwound

A bellyfull of teenage death in this funny & frieghtening spook tale of revenge from beyond the grave! From the creepy environs of the backwoods to the corridors of deception in the schools this story slowly unravels into an intricate and terrifying urban legend!! The ending was good n' tricky and the fx, especially the fighting, was wicked!!!

Posted on March 17, 2007
- Daniel7474

That was one of the best movies on TMO!!!!

You are a great director!!!!
We LOVE it!!!!!!!!
I hope I can see more of your movies!

( Please can you rate my movies too...?:-)

Posted on March 17, 2007
- tremblett

Well I must say this was a well done movie, Things could have been done better.
This is a list of things you did great and things I didn�??t like.

- A ghost clown with a gun doesn�??t really make sense. I think you could have thought of something a bit more Original for the Killing parts.
- The laughing part was brilliantly done without that part you would have got 3 stars so I�??m glad you done well with that.
- The Editing was amazing, well done on your part.
- It could have been a lot scarier, with the music, like soft music turning into creepy music.
- The Ending twist was great; I never expected it to happen.


Well Done ZCK, let�??s hope you can make a scarier movie next time.

Posted on March 17, 2007
- earringpranks

THe ending was superb!!The fight scenes in the woods were awesome; nice editing there!!5 stars!!!

Posted on March 17, 2007
- bufu0

Some good editing in it but besides that nothing special: small amount of mods, script was ok, VA were ok,storyline good yet a lil' too strange.... Not bad but not 5* material sorry.

Bu

Posted on March 17, 2007
- NUKESTER

I thought you managed to apply a good deal of suspense into the film. It felt like an old 80's horror flick which isnt a bad thing as it felt nostalgic!! There were a few scenes a moments that could have been shaved off in time but other than that I thought you did a good job, the twist at the end was quite ingenious and I give you props for that, although it was a little confusing at the same time.

Overall a very good attempt in the Horror genre and I am sure you will get better and better with each new film! Congrats and looking forward to seeing more from you!

Nuke Well in all the Clowns!!!

Posted on March 17, 2007
- MelonTheCreeker

I could see what you were trying to do here however i think you lost grip of the movie halfway through.
As stated in a previous review, it really had the feel of a B grade Horror movie. That isnt saying its bad by any means, however i feel it could've been a lot better.
I think this movie could've been made about 5 minutes shorter and if it was made at this length i think you would've had the viewer glued to the screen. Instead in this 11 minute film there were patches that had me looking at the timer rather than focusing on the story.
The ending really didnt make much sense. I know you tried a twist and i applaud you for trying something difficult, but didnt quite come off. Better luck next time.

I could see what you were trying to do and with continued helpful reviews you can only learn and get better. So take these reviews as helpful hints and hit back bigger and better next time.

Melon!

Posted on March 17, 2007
- KaeptnWiglo

a cool movie with nice vo...

Gruss KW.

Posted on March 17, 2007
- Awsomejohn77

The plot was amazing. Some of the voice acting was eerie, like when Zac was in the woods, Very good. Great acually. 5 Stars all the way.

Posted on March 16, 2007
- ubernewbie

you standard schlock horro that fails to scare, but rather amuses us with a 'B' Grade horror feel. Not in the 'A' Grade horrors like Fear and Quietus, but amusing.

Posted on March 16, 2007
- sidy

first half was bit bored. BUT!! after half is very nice!
custom VO was so scared. excellent disappear and suddenly appear scene editing!
nice original storyline and character. i enjoyed it.
btw, do you know custom music?
if you dont know, please see my "How to Custom".
horror movie music is very important. you can get more scary and tense music.
keep up the great work.

Posted on March 16, 2007
- harrybond500

like it

Posted on March 15, 2007
- JPKocher

good effects, good movie

Posted on March 15, 2007
- thejoe8pizza

Another "Twisted" movie. The laugh was creepy but kinda annoying at times

Posted on March 14, 2007
- RaYdAwG

ahh the voices in my head!! Somebody make em stop!!!

dude...I'm gonna be hearing those voices in my nightmares for the next week...lol

That was a really good movie! The script was pretty good. I don't agree with your music choices you made for certain scenes, but the voices...those were awesome! The vo's, laughing, etc. Overall, a very good movie!

Posted on March 14, 2007
- cdhd

that was probably the creepiest laugh i have ever heard if i was the judge i would put that on top top top top top top top top top top ekct.....!!!!!!

Posted on March 14, 2007
- howard_studio

5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 stars
i give you a big big 5!!!!!



pssst make some more of this movies ;)

Posted on March 14, 2007
- bruscar5

Do I really need a reson to give a great movie five stars? Great work, good story, great editing, overall very nice!

Posted on March 13, 2007
- Jibby278

Awesome editing and a great plot.

Morale of the story... dont hire hitmen, it never ends well

Posted on March 13, 2007
- VandrendeOrn

Awesome horror movie! I loved how some of the scenes faded into red. the story was also very nice, and the ending was a great twist!

Posted on March 13, 2007
- Howitzer

Not a bad horror there! That laugh chilled me to the bone *shudder*. quite a good story, a little confusing right at the end though. Some very nice editing effects!
Congrats :)

Posted on March 12, 2007