Poetry Of Plague Dino edit
 
 
 
Review Count: 29
Average Rating: 4.48 stars
Genre: Comedy
Length: 0 minutes 44 seconds
 
Posted on: January 5, 2007
 
 
Film Description
Alright this is the spiced up new and improved version of my first poetry movie.

How is it new and Improved. Cave paintings That's How.

Special thanks to alphadrop once more for the plague suit.

****Zombie The Costume I downloaded from the mod site http://www.8eyedbaby.com/
The paintings are back drops go here :
http://allboards.lionhead.com/showthread.php?t=129731&highlight=back+drops
For instructions on making backdrops.
 
Reviews
- Judyann88

hehe that's why they went extincted
great poem:)

Posted on February 5, 2007
- Wulf_Jarlson

I have chickens. For the eggs. But after seeing this They might suffer some sort of mass extinction. Nah. They probobly taste like chicken. But I Know this place where animals go to die. I can go and with little effort Just pick a hunk of flesh and put it in my grocery cart.

Now for the review. I can not say there is anything I would have done differently. Save maybe add some music. Not that it needed it. I really only noticed it cause I was looking for something to comment on.

Posted on February 1, 2007
- Trashman

Good goofy fun:-)
I like the poetry style in telling the fate of the dinos:-)

Posted on January 27, 2007
- makrim83

Poetry is definatly your thing it was nicely written and original :)

Posted on January 20, 2007
- sweatyshoulder

You are very poetic! I've seen two of your movies so far, and even though they are kind of pointless, I do get a kick out of 'em. :) Nice job.

Posted on January 17, 2007
- jojobaby

Not bad! Tastes like chicken.

Posted on January 16, 2007
- homemadeeye

****MoMc Review****

Editing 10/10
The editing was perfect. It was a really short movie, and there wasn't anything negative to say about the editing.

Sound 10/10
The sound was perfect. The voice overs were perfect, and I don't think music was needed in this movie.

Originality 5/10
It was a creative idea for a movie, but I don't really think it was a good idea for a movie. It was executed as best it could have been, I just don't think it was a good idea for a movie.

Funniness 4/20
I really didn't find this funny at all. I didn't come close to laughing at all during those 44 seconds. I gave you points for good rhymes, but it just wasn't funny.

Overall: 29/50
2.9 stars

Posted on January 12, 2007
- JazzX

44 seconds - as I sharpened my "one star" pencil, the poetry started.

Great poem, brilliantly delivered with nice overlays illustrating the words bang on time. And we get to learn something about our history ;)

This film is the shortest ever to get 5-stars off me. So congratulations - I wouldn't want it much shorter though.

Posted on January 12, 2007
- biggstrek

The BIGGSTREK MoMc Comedy Review:

[A] Story ........... (0-1): 0.7
[b] Dialogue ........ (0-1): 0.8
[C] Production ...... (0-1): 0.7
[D] Sound ........... (0-1): 0.6
[E] X Factor ... (-2 to +2): 1

[Total] ....... (A+B+C+D+E): 3.8

[Comment]: I have a bit of a soft spot for poetry and rhyming in TMO movies (having done it myself). This was short and sweet... and pretty neat (OK, I'll stop now!) It was certainly funny and pretty well exectuted. I DID have to watch it twice to fully appreciate the poem (I missed the, um, whats-the-word... rhythym? iambic pentamiter? of it the first time through). Loved the cheesy cave drawings! Added a nice comic touch to it. Nice one! Want more!

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An explanation of the BIGGSTREK Review System
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Posted on January 10, 2007
- Yodabob

Not too shabby. Just lookin for more I guess.
I do like your writing style though reminds me of an old sho I used to watch called House of Frankenstien with Vincent Price. You just got a nostalgia star from me!

Posted on January 8, 2007
- monkeybiz

¤~¤ MoMC Review ¤~¤
Duey Decimal Rating: 3.7
Likes: The poem was well written and the comedic timing was good.
Dislikes: The film was very short, the scenes were very plain, The VO was too loud (or too close to the mic or something) at some points.
I found your film: on MoMC Round 10 Comedies
~Duey

Posted on January 8, 2007
- ubernewbie

****MoMc Review****

Cute and short. Not bad Plague.

Posted on January 8, 2007
- simbocradle

it wasn't the most funniest short film i've seen, the whole film was about one joke and as much short and nice it was, it seems that it could have been a bit better and you could have made it better, good work hope to see more films from you

Posted on January 8, 2007
- Mildheadwound

I don't know, i like things that taste like chicken! And homages to them, twice as much!! Short and informative!!!

Posted on January 7, 2007
- kwistufa

hahaha!
The little animation in the bar at the very end was perfect.

Posted on January 7, 2007
- JohnOkinawa

Well there's only one joke in this whole film, but I didn't find myself laughing. It was a small intelligent poem, but I felt that it could've gone longer even though the idea here is for a short comedy. The other thing that I found annoying was the voice over in the beginning. The guy was too close to the mic and it added a little "Spfff" sound which hurt my ear a bit. I found myself rewinding the movie and replaying it over because I was trying to hear what the guy was saying...it was almost incomprehensible at some places.

Another thing that caught my attention was the guy who was telling the joke. He was such in a weird costume. I'm pretty sure the audience doesn't understand why he would be in that costume at a bar...it just seemed so out of place. Also the guy sweeping the street was rather odd.

A line that was conflicting to me was "Dinosaurs brought mankind perfect happiness and bliss." because we watch movies such as "Jurrassic Park" which is totally opposite.

Don't get me wrong, I still thought this was a noble effort from such a director as God_Of_Plague however, I personally don't believe that this movie deserves anything more than a three star.
I did not enjoy it and short comedies are my cup of tea...I just hate comedies that overdue it and you certainly did not.

I'm not trying to be nit picky. It's just harder judging short movies because we only get a limited time and we don't really know what you're really capable of.
I loved the concept about the hunting vice versa and the 'it tastes like chicken joke' but this was just way too short for me that didn't give me a burst of joy and laughter. Good work though.

Posted on January 7, 2007
- MotherFuhrer

I'm sorry. I did not laugh once through that. I want my 44 seconds back. You get a two for effort.

Posted on January 7, 2007
- WorldPictures

Really great funny quick shorts here. Were loving every edition and this one was the best.

Posted on January 7, 2007
- EmileJohnSawyer

heheheheheheheheehehe
kicks ......WELL YOU KNOW WHAT AM GOING TO SAY!! :)

Posted on January 7, 2007
- DorianRust

Well this is a very improved version of one I've already seen, really fun ;-D

Posted on January 7, 2007
- GodsLittleMonster

ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha HA!!!!!

That was so freaking awesome!

Overall the dialouge was kick ass! Oh my god!!! So good :)

Posted on January 7, 2007
- chino69

LOL, short and sweet. I like how you presented it. I wonder if they did taste like... !

Posted on January 6, 2007
- Daninsky

Great piece of poetry with a important message about the way we treat the environment, at least I think so...

...anyways, I love dinosaur movies.

Posted on January 6, 2007
- cheese101

pretty random

Posted on January 6, 2007
- siclops

Cool poetry!!

Posted on January 6, 2007
- rysto

A unique theory on dinosaur extinction. I definately have not heard of that one before....

Posted on January 5, 2007
- Andy_inc

Hehe, I loved the cave paintings and the way you presented this movie. Good job!

Posted on January 5, 2007
- jasonkummerfeldt

Ahahaha nice poetry movie, that was actually rather good. :)

~jason

Posted on January 5, 2007
- zombieshadow1

Perfect!!!two ques though howd you get that cool costume and howd you do the paintings?please rate my movie Tales Of Shock Episode1-Ruthless Killer just click on my name and please answer my ques!=)

Posted on January 5, 2007