Internal Darkness Eps 1
 
 
Studio: IISharperII
 
Review Count: 11
Average Rating: 4.45 stars
Genre: Sci-Fi
Length: 4 minutes 22 seconds
 
Posted on: October 17, 2006
 
 
Film Description
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This movie will be taken down to make room for episode 4
If you still wish to see this episode go to this link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BWU8e3VJeQo



This is the start of a sci-fi drama series that I based on a story I started writting ages back. Strangely though, the original story was midival fantasy, so its been interesting translating it into a modern day setting.

No voice acting in this, but I hope to have some in the next episode. Comments on how I can improve the story and/or the camera angles are appreciated :) . This is my first movie (that has some sort of plot to it.)

Music from Flash-kit.com
 
Reviews
- Rik_Vargard

Great first episode! Very nice work! :)

Posted on December 11, 2006
- parsons

Awsome!!! really good work, some very good filming techniques, good story and had decent length!

Posted on December 11, 2006
- SpaceChicken8563

A great storyline carried this through.
Original stuff, perhaps even inspirational.

Good work.

Posted on December 10, 2006
- Morris101

Nice introduction there. Well put together. Yes some VOs would be nice, but you don't always need them to tell a story :-)

The only downside was that the smaller subtitles were a little hard to read.
I would not dream of marking you down though becuase the story is interesting... Well done!

Take care

Posted on November 7, 2006
- MovieMoose13

Wow that was A very nice First Movie IM like 40 some movies in and I'm still not that good. Also I was wondering Were Did you Get THat Cafe Bar thingy Sceen I've seen it in other peoples movies and they havnt responded to my quetion yet so I was just hoping you could tell me. Any way Good Movie and I hope to See more of these in the Future

Posted on November 2, 2006
- JazzX

Very good music and camerawork, but the narrative got lost - sometimes I wasn't sure if it was a narrator talking or one of the characters. Then there was that horrible font that was impossible to read in online quality. Some bad spelling in the subtitles too ("psycology" should be "psychology" for instance).While not terminal, it does cheapen the film. If you make a good film like this, it deserves good spelling.

But the story seems to be a good one - that's the main thing. Good job on that.

Posted on October 25, 2006
- sidy

is this really first movie? good work!
nice using freecam and custom music. good original storyline. keep it up.

ps. its GOOOD poster. i think you can make good custom backdrop & overlay (custom title, credits, special effects, etc etc)
if you dont know, please check community -> backdrop gallery : )

Posted on October 25, 2006
- headhoncho

HH Reviews
Hey man add VO and it gets a 5. That simple. I really did like the plot and just an all around good movie.
If you want check out my main movie:
http://movies.lionhead.com/movie/112465
Fatal Underestimation
Its deep...you might cry :)

Posted on October 24, 2006
- ryancastlemaine

This movies has piqued my interest. And even though it only has subtitles, I would still like to return and see the next episodes.

I would suggest that you make sure that the subtitle fonts are big enough to read. I found the font for ?soultaker-guy? was a bit unreadable.

This movie inspires me to put even more energy into creating my own. Great work!

Posted on October 21, 2006
- EttoreMuti

I wait for the next...great sci fi!if yu like sci-fi please see and check my movie http://movies.lionhead.com/movie/111788 BYE

Posted on October 18, 2006
- OlliEntertainment

Great movie..
Good work..

Film on!!
Plz check my new one...thx...

Posted on October 18, 2006