Dear Diary I killed another
 
 
Studio: ZCK_legend
 
Review Count: 62
Average Rating: 4.48 stars
Genre: Horror
Length: 7 minutes 41 seconds
 
Posted on: April 6, 2006
 
 
Film Description
------------Waring-------------
THIS MOVIE IS RATED R FOR HEAVY VIOLENCE AND BLOOD AND GORE
do you know the mind of a seriol killer?offiser stan was on a case and comes across something....a book....a murder's diary.as he reads he is frightened for his life.but you will have to watch to find out.the killers name is James Lee.james was taunted all his life and now hes tired of it.He has no reason for killing he does it to here the victum scream,it makes him feel powerful.this movie has VO's and backdrops.make sure to check out my studio for a laugh at my movie Kids of KMHS 2..one of the funniest comedys on TMO.hope you love the movie.
oh and one more thing....if you rate mine thinking your going to get a rating from me...Ill cut you balls off with a rusty knife.

Why are everyone saying this movie is funney?
 
Featured Reviews
- Hami13

Clearly better than Twisted! I loved the way you edited teh scenes and the backdrops made a perfect touch! The way the killer asked to come in! Wow! i truly loved it! Way better than Twisted! 100000 times better than twisted no offence i liked twisted but this was the cherry on my ice cream! I loved it!

Watch out for Consequence COMING SOON!!!

R8 My Movies!!!!

Posted on May 11, 2006
- Mildheadwound

Well, that'll teach ya' not to read someone else's diary! 'Went through the same experience exactly, with my sister. Bloody carnage and good vo's punctuate this tale of built up rage!

Posted on May 6, 2006
- FLIPMANBURN

This was great horror flick. The story was interesting and so was the main character. The edit was good, for the most part and the dialog was well written. The only problems were in the VO department. Some parts you couldn't even hear them. Overall, a nice attempt at making an original horror flick. - 4 stars
Don't forget to check out SICKOID FLICKS!

Posted on May 2, 2006
- poiuytrewq

This movie was great.
This was very original.
It had great backdrops
The sound effects and vo's were amazing
The story was intresting and suspensful
It was truley scary

This movie will be in my contest and is one of the best horrors.
http://allboards.lionhead.com/showthread.php?t=164464

Posted on April 30, 2006
- Richegroover

Wow - a surprisingly good horror/thriller - I say surprisingly because so many try and fail to make a compelling horror movie on TMO.

For me the vietnam scenes seemed to slow down the movie overall, if these were short or even removed and replaced by something else it would have been even better.

:)

Rich

Posted on April 28, 2006
- McCusto

Wow. This was an excellent movie. This was beautifully directed, and had superb editing. The music that you chose fit in with the scene(s) that it went through. The ending was surprising, but it didn't surprise me that he was still there. No one leaves their diary behind :p

Posted on April 22, 2006
- DFIK

I thought about giving this a 4 star rating, but there's jsut too many good things that beat the bad. I'll go for the bad first though:

Nagative: The VO's were too soft, especially during the war scene in Vietnam. I couldn't understand a thing he said. Othertimes I had to lean in close to my computer to hear anything, which agitated me. Also, you really sohuld try to get other people to help you out with VO's -- doing them all yourself isn't always the best idea.

Positive: Wodnerful use of backdrops etc. I especially love the scene with the gun to the guys head. Very well done. Sometiems gore isn't necessary, but I feel you didn't use it too much, and the fact of the matter is -- it's really not that gory. It's jsut blood. blood doesn't mean gore, there is definitely a difference. So I think you had jsut the right ammount of blood/gore, but next time use a darker red, as it seemed a little out of place. Also, the diary thing was well done as well, and it worked really well. The plot was very interesting and kept me hooked. I applaud you.

Posted on April 21, 2006
- JJPATEL

A interesting movie to be made by a film-maker who likes his comedies (which are pretty wacky) so brave attempt to make an horror which was interesting to watch however it wasn't as gripping or atmospheric as I hoped it would be. Marks for doing the editing really well and the custom "Blood" scenes were pretty impressive and the plot also kept me watching but what did put me off was the same VO. I know VO is probably the hardest thing to do in a movie, I felt a sense of variation could of been done here and at time, it was soft-spoken. Overall, a good thriller of a movie to watch with a decent story to it!

Posted on April 19, 2006
- mikeylevy890

I actually logged in just to 5-star this movie, i know that may not sound like much but a have VERY short patience. The vo's where not perfect but i understood every word and thats what matters. the editing was phenominal and there was a great use of custom backdrops to give the bloody effect. The whole way you carried out the movie left me on the edge of my seat wating for more. And that was one of the greatest, most well thought out endings iv ever seen.

Posted on April 19, 2006
- theVillain

You've impressed me very much, this is a gigantic departure from KMHS. You have done a great job, the diary idea was beautifully executed. Your v/o's were great as well, even the echoing laugh was cool. Your SFX were very well done, didn't expect them. Only thing I can say that wasn't up to par with the rest of the film would be the music, other than that though...Great film!

Posted on April 17, 2006
- kos78

A policeman comes to know what is in the mind of a serial killer.

Concept - 7 - Solid concept, with a good script.
Direction - 6 - Good progression through the scenes to show the development of the narrator's character as shaped by various events in his life. Good music, though some scores didn't work so well. In particular, the 1960's and Vietnam scenes may have benefitted from more appropriate music to fit the era. Personally I'm not keen on using gore to induce horror; I think that it is more horrifying if the gore is not shown but only implied. The viewer's imagination is a much more powerful tool than the pixels on the screen -- it is the movie-maker's job to spark that imagination in the right direction.
Production - 7 - The VO's were too soft throughout, though particularly noticable in the Vietnam scenes where the gun sound effects completely drowned out the voices. The special effects were a mixed bad; some were good and others not so. Blood, for example, is typically a darker red not bright red. Character - 7 - The narrator's character was well portrayed, and I give credit for trying to really get into this character's psyche and motivation -- I commend the movie-maker for having character-driven plots rather than plot-driven characters. I also give credit for doing all the VO's, as I know this is difficult. However, the narrator's character ultimately didn't come across as believable to me, due to a combination of the script and the timbre of the VO's.

Overall, I thought the movie was an excellent attempt which showed real creativity on the part of the producer. All the best for the future.

Posted on April 15, 2006
- Abrey

Come on man back man! just back off! and leave this dude alone he's done nothing to you and you go one star him! well this five star will help go to the top man all the way.

p.s. block non studios.

Posted on April 11, 2006
- akinis

ZCK, this is by far your best movie. Great story, your voice overs were top knotch, and yes, your editing could have been a little tighter, but it was still really good. Sound effects were on point. The cutaway static scenes could have been done a little better but you show real potential!
Good Show M8

Posted on April 9, 2006
- StevenKreg

Excellent movie, good story and it kept me interested the whole time. Wonderful job with flashbacks, and the way you mixed all the scenes was excellent.

My only suggestion is just a bit tighter cuts.

Posted on April 9, 2006
- KeViNp

Oh WOW What an ending! A very very clever movie with a good use of props, sets, and characters. Very entertaining for the horror lovers. A great and original story brought this to life for me and the ending was great. You used the pictures of dead people to your advantage making them seem bloody and dead. One of the best movies on TMO.
HAND

Posted on April 9, 2006
- thebaloob123

I'm book marking this! OMG!


PS: thanks for booking my film.

Posted on April 9, 2006
- The-ConFuzion

This movie was very well put together. One of the best I have seen in a while. Also I thought this movie was really funny. Just an amazing film.

Posted on April 8, 2006
- ewatt23

THAT WAS FRIGHTENING!!!

Posted on April 8, 2006
- MattVolkert

Best TMO movie yet!

Posted on April 8, 2006
- SHERWINLIU

I'm really glad I watched this... I'm particularly impressed with your movie having an overarching structure and being episodic in nature, and actually following through - a rarity on TMO. The story is compelling, and engrossing as well. My guess is you are pretty young, and this is quite an achievement! I'm not sure this relates to "honesty" though.

In any case, congratulations on a very solid piece of work here! :)

Posted on April 7, 2006
 
Reviews
- Moviegoer1994

that was WAY GOOD!
i loved the way the plot built up and the ending was good
i hope u make a sequel!
please rate my movie "The Violent Robot"

Posted on March 18, 2007
- cdhd

Im with Adison11 how did you get that blood?

Posted on March 15, 2007
- lord112

wow

Posted on October 16, 2006
- Zman_008

Wow dude that was great i would put that up there with Jack the ripper part 2 that was excellent great job......plz watch andrate my movies

Posted on July 28, 2006
- actresswannabe

The VOs were a little low and I couldn't understand what you said in some scenes. The custom backdrops and story line were great so I gave you 4 stars.

Posted on June 1, 2006
- JD573

I watched this during the day and it still freaked me out

Posted on May 26, 2006
- Adison11

wow how did you get the blood?

Posted on May 13, 2006
- steelblade_1

Wow, some pretty awful cops to miss a guy sleeping behind the couch. :)

All in all a nice idea, nicely presented. step by step he turns into a killer as each petty act against him stacks on one another.

Posted on May 12, 2006
- Hami13

Clearly better than Twisted! I loved the way you edited teh scenes and the backdrops made a perfect touch! The way the killer asked to come in! Wow! i truly loved it! Way better than Twisted! 100000 times better than twisted no offence i liked twisted but this was the cherry on my ice cream! I loved it!

Watch out for Consequence COMING SOON!!!

R8 My Movies!!!!

Posted on May 11, 2006
- Mildheadwound

Well, that'll teach ya' not to read someone else's diary! 'Went through the same experience exactly, with my sister. Bloody carnage and good vo's punctuate this tale of built up rage!

Posted on May 6, 2006
- killersamos

i see what you meen that was freaky but it was amazing!! the best was when he was in viatnam and killed the sarg guy looked very good lying there on the floor dead! lol very good plot !

Posted on May 6, 2006
- SothisAmon

Not a bad movie but not as brutal as its poster lead me to believe i thought it was a bit lacking in violence it seemed to cut to boring diary reading cut to killer, killers kills some of the murders were nicly done i shot them in the face i liked that, i havent done a decent one in a bit but i think you inspired me to create a new chapter in my chicken killings, your blood was well good nice job. Its seemed a bit lacking in brutality though, i wouldnt bother with a story just savage violence but thats me it should have been savage violence to brutal music... :P maybe thats me bt there you go.
Horrors with cannibal corpse posters must have death metal in them and they must be sick and gory. I have a movie about a downs syndrome cannibal eating a premature baby that you might like, if thats your thing ;) Decent film but too long i think the diary scenes repeted, i liked how you tried to show where he got the "blood lust" from, the nam and that but its a shame you couldnt have condensed it maybe started it in the nam, i know that conflicts with your idea of killing the former love rivil but i reckon that he should have done that after the war maybe say "i sticked him the same way i sticked the [wash your mouth out!] back in nam" decent but not brutal enough, i have a feeling next time if you make a horror a bit more violent and a bit shorter :) classic movie then will be created.

Posted on May 6, 2006
- FLIPMANBURN

This was great horror flick. The story was interesting and so was the main character. The edit was good, for the most part and the dialog was well written. The only problems were in the VO department. Some parts you couldn't even hear them. Overall, a nice attempt at making an original horror flick. - 4 stars
Don't forget to check out SICKOID FLICKS!

Posted on May 2, 2006
- HalfSwiss

Swiss Ninja 4th review-
I love the horror in this movie! Very chilling!

Posted on April 30, 2006
- poiuytrewq

This movie was great.
This was very original.
It had great backdrops
The sound effects and vo's were amazing
The story was intresting and suspensful
It was truley scary

This movie will be in my contest and is one of the best horrors.
http://allboards.lionhead.com/showthread.php?t=164464

Posted on April 30, 2006
- Rik_Vargard

Great story! Also great VO's, somewhat low on some parts compared to the music ond FX sounds.
Loved it! Keep it coming!

Posted on April 28, 2006
- Richegroover

Wow - a surprisingly good horror/thriller - I say surprisingly because so many try and fail to make a compelling horror movie on TMO.

For me the vietnam scenes seemed to slow down the movie overall, if these were short or even removed and replaced by something else it would have been even better.

:)

Rich

Posted on April 28, 2006
- Apocryphon

Surprisingly good. Never saw this coming from your studio, based on previous movies. Weakest part was the Vietnam scenes, far too long and flabby, needed to be seriously edited and cut down to the relevant core. Good customs and mostly good VO, great atmosphere and a killer with depth.
Good movie.
4.4

Posted on April 23, 2006
- nightmare2146

great movie although at times the VOs were a little quiet, I'm not sure if this was a ploy though to get me to turn the volume up ready for the scream, excellent story and told well

Posted on April 23, 2006
- Knopfer

good job

Posted on April 23, 2006
- McCusto

Wow. This was an excellent movie. This was beautifully directed, and had superb editing. The music that you chose fit in with the scene(s) that it went through. The ending was surprising, but it didn't surprise me that he was still there. No one leaves their diary behind :p

Posted on April 22, 2006
- DFIK

I thought about giving this a 4 star rating, but there's jsut too many good things that beat the bad. I'll go for the bad first though:

Nagative: The VO's were too soft, especially during the war scene in Vietnam. I couldn't understand a thing he said. Othertimes I had to lean in close to my computer to hear anything, which agitated me. Also, you really sohuld try to get other people to help you out with VO's -- doing them all yourself isn't always the best idea.

Positive: Wodnerful use of backdrops etc. I especially love the scene with the gun to the guys head. Very well done. Sometiems gore isn't necessary, but I feel you didn't use it too much, and the fact of the matter is -- it's really not that gory. It's jsut blood. blood doesn't mean gore, there is definitely a difference. So I think you had jsut the right ammount of blood/gore, but next time use a darker red, as it seemed a little out of place. Also, the diary thing was well done as well, and it worked really well. The plot was very interesting and kept me hooked. I applaud you.

Posted on April 21, 2006
- Mogwa

Ambitious and well crafted.

Posted on April 20, 2006
- 859

Wow

Posted on April 20, 2006
- JJPATEL

A interesting movie to be made by a film-maker who likes his comedies (which are pretty wacky) so brave attempt to make an horror which was interesting to watch however it wasn't as gripping or atmospheric as I hoped it would be. Marks for doing the editing really well and the custom "Blood" scenes were pretty impressive and the plot also kept me watching but what did put me off was the same VO. I know VO is probably the hardest thing to do in a movie, I felt a sense of variation could of been done here and at time, it was soft-spoken. Overall, a good thriller of a movie to watch with a decent story to it!

Posted on April 19, 2006
- mikeylevy890

I actually logged in just to 5-star this movie, i know that may not sound like much but a have VERY short patience. The vo's where not perfect but i understood every word and thats what matters. the editing was phenominal and there was a great use of custom backdrops to give the bloody effect. The whole way you carried out the movie left me on the edge of my seat wating for more. And that was one of the greatest, most well thought out endings iv ever seen.

Posted on April 19, 2006
- RALLTD

Originality:7/10 Another good serial killer movie.

Plot/Story:6/10 Not a big fan of this type of plot,it's been done before and tends to get repetitive.We go from one scene to another in a diary format to see repeated killings.That said,your movie is still pretty good.

Dialogue:7/10 Some VO volume problems where the music was louder than the dialogue,and it's a shame because your VO acting was pretty darn good.

Editing:7/10 No big problems ,one comment I would make is don't do custom effects just because you can.A movie with a good story doesn't need them and it tends to make a movie jumpy.You do pretty good stuff I just don't know if all of them were needed.

Wow:8/10 A good solid movie about a serial killer.I really don't care for the repetitive nature of these type of plots ,but you pulled it off well.



35/50= 4stars

Posted on April 19, 2006
- theVillain

You've impressed me very much, this is a gigantic departure from KMHS. You have done a great job, the diary idea was beautifully executed. Your v/o's were great as well, even the echoing laugh was cool. Your SFX were very well done, didn't expect them. Only thing I can say that wasn't up to par with the rest of the film would be the music, other than that though...Great film!

Posted on April 17, 2006
- PP87

Cool movie, a good script and some interesting characters. But I didnt like the VO's, because they ruined the scary mood. I hope that laugh at the end of the movie wasnt meant to be scary, it was just annoying! Although a great job.

Posted on April 16, 2006
- kos78

A policeman comes to know what is in the mind of a serial killer.

Concept - 7 - Solid concept, with a good script.
Direction - 6 - Good progression through the scenes to show the development of the narrator's character as shaped by various events in his life. Good music, though some scores didn't work so well. In particular, the 1960's and Vietnam scenes may have benefitted from more appropriate music to fit the era. Personally I'm not keen on using gore to induce horror; I think that it is more horrifying if the gore is not shown but only implied. The viewer's imagination is a much more powerful tool than the pixels on the screen -- it is the movie-maker's job to spark that imagination in the right direction.
Production - 7 - The VO's were too soft throughout, though particularly noticable in the Vietnam scenes where the gun sound effects completely drowned out the voices. The special effects were a mixed bad; some were good and others not so. Blood, for example, is typically a darker red not bright red. Character - 7 - The narrator's character was well portrayed, and I give credit for trying to really get into this character's psyche and motivation -- I commend the movie-maker for having character-driven plots rather than plot-driven characters. I also give credit for doing all the VO's, as I know this is difficult. However, the narrator's character ultimately didn't come across as believable to me, due to a combination of the script and the timbre of the VO's.

Overall, I thought the movie was an excellent attempt which showed real creativity on the part of the producer. All the best for the future.

Posted on April 15, 2006
- TimBurtonFan

A good horrormovie.

Posted on April 14, 2006
- ThomasJancey

How does anyone see potential in a film like this? The VOs were terrible... you did everyone yourself! You were afraid to speak up. Your picture of the dead guy was the worst I've ever seen... you had the same guy for too many roles... at least in my films, I camo them so you can't tell easily it's the same guy. I'll bookmark this film up my arse and see if my sh*t will like it.

Posted on April 14, 2006
- Abrey

Come on man back man! just back off! and leave this dude alone he's done nothing to you and you go one star him! well this five star will help go to the top man all the way.

p.s. block non studios.

Posted on April 11, 2006
- savage_rabbit

Sorry, but I really didn't like this movie. The voiceovers didn't fit at all and the plot felt both very contrived and cliche. However, the editting was on-par, so I will give it 3 stars instead of 2.

Posted on April 10, 2006
- EthanRunt

creepy, the voices were a little quiet under some of the vietnam stuff, but in all honesty this is another gem you have provided us with, will this streak stop, i hope not, thank you, and it's not funny, just a little light.

Posted on April 10, 2006
- Windu

I thought it sereved its purpose as a horror, though not scary, it was suspenseful, and that kept me watching. One thing was interesting a soon as the Vietnam sequence started I totally new you were watching Forrest Gump the day before; maybe on TBS.

Posted on April 10, 2006
- akinis

ZCK, this is by far your best movie. Great story, your voice overs were top knotch, and yes, your editing could have been a little tighter, but it was still really good. Sound effects were on point. The cutaway static scenes could have been done a little better but you show real potential!
Good Show M8

Posted on April 9, 2006
- nutzhouse

Ok cool voice overs and the scenes well done... good movie making!

Posted on April 9, 2006
- Oh_Come_On

Hmmm...Very creepy horror movie! There was a really nice ending, and I thought the VOs were actually pretty good! The blood was a nice touch, and I don't see how anyone could find this movie scary.

Posted on April 9, 2006
- Spaceman72

Dear diary I reviewed another great horror movie! :) Well done job on this movie. Excellent storyplot, nice blood effects and well done voice overs makes this movie a breathtaking horror movie.

Posted on April 9, 2006
- deenswe2003

A very disterbing movie to be sure. i didn't think it was funny at all.

Posted on April 9, 2006
- Arawna11

Originality: 7
Editing: 7
Dialogue: 7
Story: 8
WOW Factor: 7
Overall: 36 = 4 stars
Good movie wih some few mistakes. The backdrops just can be more accurated (take a look on some tutorials) and the VO isn't perfect. The adolescent voices on mature guys don't fit good really.

Posted on April 9, 2006
- 02PARSIM

I really enjoyed this, mainly because it was such an intriguing story that had me gripped. It is a flawed movie, the VO's admiteddly are a little bit poor, but then again i don't use them so can't really criticse in this area. The killer and the idea was very intelligent and woven into the story very well. His motives were shocking and many of the scenes were quite chilling. A very solid horror, and unlike ur thread says, this is not funny.

Posted on April 9, 2006
- Butchered_Studios

right the idea was fantastic and pulled off well but the special effects were not that good and the VOs were bad but The movie kept me captivated so 4 stars.

Posted on April 9, 2006
- markrichardbehenna

Voiceovers were just horrible, it's not that hard to request some voice actors, not only does it seem like a teenage voice is trying to do all the voices of 30 year old males, But even the accents used was terrible. The gore would have been an interesting idea if it wasn't shoved in the paint programe with a few sprays of red here and there. The only good thing I thought was the story which I was hoping my help the movie rating, but after the halfway point, it was obvious things were going downhill. Some interesting ideas, but very poorly attempted in most aspects.

Posted on April 9, 2006
- x_to_the_v

very poor attempt at any real storyline. The blood looked so fake it was funny, but i rate horror movies on how much they scare, not how much they make you laugh. there was almost no origianality, the vietnam part almost certainly was taken from the movie forrest gump.

Posted on April 9, 2006
- EvilLateNightTv

Great movie. I am not sure if it was supposed to be as funny as I found it or not, but I thought it was hilarious. Great use of sets and props and all that jazz.

Posted on April 9, 2006
- StevenKreg

Excellent movie, good story and it kept me interested the whole time. Wonderful job with flashbacks, and the way you mixed all the scenes was excellent.

My only suggestion is just a bit tighter cuts.

Posted on April 9, 2006
- ubernewbie

pretty good horror, interesting twist at the end. nice editing. well done.

Posted on April 9, 2006
- KeViNp

Oh WOW What an ending! A very very clever movie with a good use of props, sets, and characters. Very entertaining for the horror lovers. A great and original story brought this to life for me and the ending was great. You used the pictures of dead people to your advantage making them seem bloody and dead. One of the best movies on TMO.
HAND

Posted on April 9, 2006
- GuyDon01

Really a nice movie, even if I'd have appreciated some subtitles too.
Good job.

Posted on April 9, 2006
- thebaloob123

I'm book marking this! OMG!


PS: thanks for booking my film.

Posted on April 9, 2006
- The-ConFuzion

This movie was very well put together. One of the best I have seen in a while. Also I thought this movie was really funny. Just an amazing film.

Posted on April 8, 2006
- ewatt23

THAT WAS FRIGHTENING!!!

Posted on April 8, 2006
- MattVolkert

Best TMO movie yet!

Posted on April 8, 2006
- Irish_Scorpion

Truly one of the best movie I've seen on TMO,I bow to your equal abilities.You and I would have made excellent friends,the movies we would have made would have been awe inspring.You have a gift that others don't you see more of what something is,you've taken the confines of The Movies Game and taken it further.Kuddos my friend on a job EXCELLENTLY done.

Posted on April 8, 2006
- Herow

No comment

Posted on April 8, 2006
- SHERWINLIU

I'm really glad I watched this... I'm particularly impressed with your movie having an overarching structure and being episodic in nature, and actually following through - a rarity on TMO. The story is compelling, and engrossing as well. My guess is you are pretty young, and this is quite an achievement! I'm not sure this relates to "honesty" though.

In any case, congratulations on a very solid piece of work here! :)

Posted on April 7, 2006
- micha83

wow great trailer!

please watch my movie:
Jekyll and Hyde
http://movies.lionhead.com/movie/71722

Posted on April 7, 2006
- chrisu69

great

Posted on April 7, 2006
- BigShadow

....speechless...dude that is the first movie on "The Movies" that actually scared me! That really freaked me out! Great, Unbielevable, Awsome, could you please rate my movie "The Leader of the Mob" its a commede.

Posted on April 6, 2006
- gangsterinc

woah im speechless that was frigin awesome props to you my friend i really liked that concept of the story the title grabbed me your decription and then finally the movie was just awesome very good im just spechless can u plz rate my newest film fight club 3 i need a couple more 5 stars and i will get in top 25 right now im in 27th and if u wnat i cna tell u how to make custom abckdrops just comment

Posted on April 6, 2006