Lukewarm
 
 
Studio: JammaJim5
 
Review Count: 7
Average Rating: 4.57 stars
Genre: Action
Length: 8 minutes 18 seconds
 
Posted on: March 23, 2006
 
 
Film Description
Never doublecross a Girl with a High School crush !!!.....watch and learn as these two deadly divas use their feminine ways in hopes of becoming the ultimate Teacher's Pet.
 
Featured Reviews
- Mildheadwound

Sharp writing and a dull knife keep this little love-triangle, (or is it square?), filled with unpredictable turns of deception at every corner! Hilarious, perverse and immoral ~ a great combination . . .

Posted on April 9, 2006
 
Reviews
- Mildheadwound

Sharp writing and a dull knife keep this little love-triangle, (or is it square?), filled with unpredictable turns of deception at every corner! Hilarious, perverse and immoral ~ a great combination . . .

Posted on April 9, 2006
- Hoo

For a first attempt it's good stuff. It shows your trying. I think the hard work you've put in this deserves five. It had some flaws, But it was still a good stab. I really think you'll put out some great flicks in the future! Keep Filming!

Posted on March 29, 2006
- deenswe2003

Akinis pretty much has this review nailed. I like the twist with the friend already being involved although as greg247 pointed out once someone is dead they should stay dead unless their a zombie. Keep at it!

Posted on March 27, 2006
- RALLTD

Originality:9/10 A fresh new story.

Plot/Story:6/10 While overall the story is good,there are some problems.Don't these people die.Two of them have multiple stab wounds and get up and go on like nothing ever happened,one smokes a cigarette.

Dialogue:7/10 I think it could have been polished ,but it wasn't bad.

Editing:7/10 Needed some smoothing over,jumpiness mostly in the beginning made it hard to get into.It did get better though.

Wow:7/10 You have a good story ,but at times unrealistic.Fine tune your plot so it doesn't have spots where the viewer is saying 'that shouldn't happen'.



36/40=4 stars

Posted on March 25, 2006
- Gregg247

Very good movie! those chicks need a better knife, though. It sure couldn't do the job! lol

Posted on March 25, 2006
- akinis

Ok first off, remove the mumble effect. Most people can't stand it. The subtitles are well done, but a little off at point. Clever storyline, but a little unbelievable. you definately need to work on your cut and pasting to drive the movie along, however for a first attempt, i'd say you did quite good. It really is a 2-3 star movie unfortunatly, but i'm giving you 4 stars since its your first attempt. With some practice, you should come along splendidly! Play with the Post Production more next time, its worth taking a few extra hours to fine tune everything. All in all a very solid first attempt though :) PS ignore people who say i loved your movie, thx now watch mine..... they don't even waste time watching. they are 5 star hobos who just give you 5 stars without even watchin your movie in hopes you'll go watch and rate theirs.

Posted on March 25, 2006
- H3llspawn6sic6

great movie, i loved all the action and suspence. great! can u rate my alien love thx.

Posted on March 23, 2006