The Fate of Traitors Part One
 
 
Studio: Tie
 
Review Count: 14
Average Rating: 3.93 stars
Genre: Action
Length: 4 minutes 50 seconds
 
Posted on: March 19, 2006
 
 
Film Description
The Fate of Traitors Part One

Sally (Salvatore) and Rex are two gangsters, who have displeased their Boss one to many times. Out of fear of being robbed out, they decide to rob a bank, and then disappear. Will they succed, or will they pay the price for betraying their former Boss Don Al D. Duck.

Hope that you will enjoy it. Both sequels has also been uploaded.

Please rate this one, and if you like it, here is the link to the sequels:

The Fate of Traitors Part Two
http://movies.lionhead.com/movie/66716

The Fate of Traitors Part Three
http://movies.lionhead.com/movie/67795
 
Featured Reviews
- Timo666

Nice mafia action movie with an interesting plot. I'll make sure to watch the other parts too!

Posted on April 1, 2006
- 02PARSIM

I promised to watch this and so i shall. There is one mystery to me about this film, y am i the first 2 give this a five? This is five star material, the four stars i suppose hv some good reasoning but this is brilliant, the plot is just absolutely brilliant! Sure this type of film is common, but it worked. Ot was memorable, it had good pacing and really good usage of music to make the whole thing work more. I eagerly anticpate the nxt parts. I will bookmark them and watch them sumtime later. But i promise i will eventually get round to watching them.

Posted on April 1, 2006
- PimpsMcgee

Great movie. Really good editing. Cant wait to see part 2. Plot was amazing. liked the subtle comedy also.
Keep at it.


Please watch my movies, Mind of a murderer, and ,pimps playas and joes. THank you.
There are two "mind of a murderer", so watch the one that says it is less delayed.

Posted on March 24, 2006
- WishfullThinker

Editing : 2/3 - Good editing, but your fades seem out of place. Looks like you deleted a scene but didn't adjust the fades afterwards.
Dialogue : 3/3 - Good subtitles. Minor quibble - Try to avoid subtitles over fade in and outs, it's really annoying to read.
Plot : 3/4 - Looks good so far, but pretty standard fare, maybe in part 2 things will get a bit more complex.
Scene/Prop use :3/3 - Good use of props and scenes, no problems there.
Entertainment : 3/5 - These types of movies are pretty common on TMO, you just need something to it to make it stand above the crowd.
Music :2/2 - The music selection worked in my opinon, no problems there.

Total : 16/20 4 stars - Good job. Keep up the good work.

Posted on March 21, 2006
- Fersner

Okay. First. GREAT MOVIE. Really liked the plot! LOTS of GREAT action, twisted with some comedy, REALLY GOOD JOB!!! Can't wait to see part 2!

I only have a question: Is it a kind of fog in the office in the beginning of the movie?

But, I have some thing I didn't liked in the movie, such as:

The music in the bagground is fating out sometimes. In the last part of the movie, the music seems like a wrong choice, because the music is kind of saying that some action on it's way.

The other lady in the lobby of the 'bank' is wearing a really sci-fi inspired costume ;-). Destroy the sentiment a bit, but it's okay, nothing special :-).

A lot of stars from me!

Posted on March 21, 2006
 
Reviews
- DarthGuybrush7

Not bad. The sory and style were interesting, but a few impausible things sunk it bit. Oh, and why was there a WWII German soldier waiting in line at the bank? Still, all in all, it's a pretty good movie.

Posted on November 11, 2006
- ShiningIdeal

This is, perhaps, a little more critical of a review than I would post but you did ask for ways to improve it.

First and foremost - Dialogue. Whether appropriate or not, mafia films have given the public a sort of 'accepted' way of speaking for mafiosos. Beyond that, this is a private organization and guarded. Also, the phrase I think you were looking for is rubbed out. I was incredibly confused about that at first till I realized the issue.

Second - Plausibility. A german soldier in the bank line. That two guys who were not made could hit a made man and still be alive if everyone knew about it. (I don't really like making this comment but..) That a black guy is working for the mafia in such a relatively high position. All these things snap plausability are combined with the problems. Bank Robbery? Hardly what normally falls under RICO style crimes, if they did something like that in the middle of the day they would know they could never go back.

Three - Other things. What era was this supposed to be in? If its classic gangster era obviously the costumes are wrong, so I assume it was either a seventies-eighties style or a modern setting ideally. Little in the scenes makes this clear to me, or gives me any hint. Find a way to try and make this clear as it sort of establishes what to expect but don't beat me over the head with it.

Watch more mafia films, there are plenty to choose from. If you need some suggestions for what would be good, ask in your thread and I'll try and point you in the right direction.

3.4

Posted on August 29, 2006
- Apocryphon

Many plot holes and implausibilities. Why is there a female German Storm Trooper in the bank Queue!? Why would a bank teller even know where a Mafia Don hangs out, never mind why she would recognise two of his men AND realise they were crossing their Don while robbing the bank!? Why...never mind, too many.
Nice try at a more complex than normal plot, the movie had ambition and was reasonably edited with an imaginative cast. Mumbles really should be turned of, especially were there is a large cast and a lot of talking. Pace was not bad, it moved along fast enough, but there was no real ear for dialogue on show. If your making a movie about the Mafia you really should watch a couple of Mafia movies first and get a feel for the language they use.
Not bad, shows promise.
3.3

Posted on April 12, 2006
- TheMGMKid1

Fairly entertaining Mafia picture. Good pace and editing. Let's see what happens next?

Posted on April 9, 2006
- THROWAXE

This flows really well. Good story, great dressing of characters and nicely edited. The last musical piece (seventies style) surprised me, it was all Godfather style up until then, but it works. Very well done !

Posted on April 9, 2006
- madgoat

Not too bad, but not impressive in any means. It's not very original. I've seen plenty of mafia movies on TMO. You should maybe research mafias and make this story more detailed, specific and different than otehr mafia movies. VOs would have been nice. Cinematogrphy isn't good. You should combine more shots with each other. I was also pretty confused about the begining. The begining didn't seem to be very good. The subtitles went by way too quickly. Other than that, not bad.

Posted on April 1, 2006
- bolt333

not a bad plot but it does seem to be a common plot

Posted on April 1, 2006
- JustinMoore

Why is there fog/smoke in the office is the building burning down? Hey look the bar's on fire too! Ahem! Seriously though, I thought it was a very interesting start to the series and will definately watch the other episodes! Overall: Pretty Good!

Posted on April 1, 2006
- Timo666

Nice mafia action movie with an interesting plot. I'll make sure to watch the other parts too!

Posted on April 1, 2006
- 02PARSIM

I promised to watch this and so i shall. There is one mystery to me about this film, y am i the first 2 give this a five? This is five star material, the four stars i suppose hv some good reasoning but this is brilliant, the plot is just absolutely brilliant! Sure this type of film is common, but it worked. Ot was memorable, it had good pacing and really good usage of music to make the whole thing work more. I eagerly anticpate the nxt parts. I will bookmark them and watch them sumtime later. But i promise i will eventually get round to watching them.

Posted on April 1, 2006
- the_georgeZILLA

There are a few missing elements in this picture and a few scenes that stretch credibility a bit (the mob boss's name is Don Al D. Duck??? It makes me laugh, yes, but is that really what you want people to do when they meet your A-1 tuff-guy?) but on the whole, this is a fun gangster flick with a nice pace and some original moments.

Posted on April 1, 2006
- PimpsMcgee

Great movie. Really good editing. Cant wait to see part 2. Plot was amazing. liked the subtle comedy also.
Keep at it.


Please watch my movies, Mind of a murderer, and ,pimps playas and joes. THank you.
There are two "mind of a murderer", so watch the one that says it is less delayed.

Posted on March 24, 2006
- WishfullThinker

Editing : 2/3 - Good editing, but your fades seem out of place. Looks like you deleted a scene but didn't adjust the fades afterwards.
Dialogue : 3/3 - Good subtitles. Minor quibble - Try to avoid subtitles over fade in and outs, it's really annoying to read.
Plot : 3/4 - Looks good so far, but pretty standard fare, maybe in part 2 things will get a bit more complex.
Scene/Prop use :3/3 - Good use of props and scenes, no problems there.
Entertainment : 3/5 - These types of movies are pretty common on TMO, you just need something to it to make it stand above the crowd.
Music :2/2 - The music selection worked in my opinon, no problems there.

Total : 16/20 4 stars - Good job. Keep up the good work.

Posted on March 21, 2006
- Fersner

Okay. First. GREAT MOVIE. Really liked the plot! LOTS of GREAT action, twisted with some comedy, REALLY GOOD JOB!!! Can't wait to see part 2!

I only have a question: Is it a kind of fog in the office in the beginning of the movie?

But, I have some thing I didn't liked in the movie, such as:

The music in the bagground is fating out sometimes. In the last part of the movie, the music seems like a wrong choice, because the music is kind of saying that some action on it's way.

The other lady in the lobby of the 'bank' is wearing a really sci-fi inspired costume ;-). Destroy the sentiment a bit, but it's okay, nothing special :-).

A lot of stars from me!

Posted on March 21, 2006