The Will
Review Count: 42
Average Rating: 4.69 stars
Genre: Action
Length: 2 minutes 35 seconds
Posted on: March 14, 2006
Film Description
Well we didn't win not even close, but thank you all for your support.

Once the plague awards are over I will make some new movies.
- Hami13

Great movie! Really liked!! Good vo!!

rate my movies!!!

Posted on April 15, 2006
- MarchFirstStudios

I really liked the entire piece but most of all, the voice-overs. The recurring "grave reservations" quote takes on different meanings throughout, and makes it more than just another machinima. The flashback to the ATM machine was a great touch and added a great deal to the storytelling aspect of the work. I hope you win, and thanks again for viewing Gunpowder. If you need some music, let me know. I'm at Marchfirststudios.

Posted on April 7, 2006
- sheelba

Well done with great voiceovers. It was quite funny with a nice plot.

Posted on April 6, 2006
- Betral


Posted on March 23, 2006
- StokeStudios

A good comedy with an interesting plot - nice work :o)
(pls check out my studio, thanks)

Posted on March 23, 2006
- akinis

Hilarious. five stars all the way. "grave reservations" was classic. seriously, so many parts were quotable.

"quick question, if i kill my husband, which is becoming increasingly more likely, what do i get?"
"dunno, life in prison? death penality maybe?"
"if that happens i'll have grave reservations"

classic. the ATM and Real Estate lines were great as well!

Posted on March 21, 2006

I have grave reservations about this (just kidding). Funny and original. The editing could have been a bit snappier. The voices were great, though. Good, recognizable characters. I liked the intro before the credits, nice music too but it stopped a bit abruptley. Funny and well done.

Posted on March 21, 2006
- sgtshock

Nice VOs, and pretty funny. Good work.

Posted on March 20, 2006
- Dulci

This definetely made me laugh! Good comedy.

Posted on March 20, 2006
- CD3141

Very impressive studio and it sounds like you had a handfull of actors playing the VO in this movie, it was also funny well done :)

Posted on March 20, 2006
- cavaleras

A very funny comedy with professional voiceovers. Looks like that you have joined real actors for the movie. Great!

Posted on March 20, 2006

That is a very funny comedy you have made there. Great editing throughout the movie and also the VO was also top notch! I felt it was abit on the short side and the plot could of been better but I'm glad the jokes were in there which made me laugh. Overall, a very good comedy and I look forward to your next comedy movie!

Posted on March 19, 2006
- ES42X

I liked the storytime better, but this was a good movie. Gotta give you credit for trying different things and not just sticking to the pretty much guaranteed hits. Bill O Reilly's EGO wants you to watch him. He just likes people hearing him talk is all.

Posted on March 19, 2006
- MarvellousGuppiMovies

My scottish housemate said she had grave reservations about that accent. Pretty decent overall though.

Posted on March 19, 2006
- benstudios1991

the best word to describe this is: perfessional. everything seemed like it was done by the master! GREAT voiceovers, perfect editing, nice customs, and most of all, classy, witty, funny humor. what a great movie! highly reccommended!

Posted on March 18, 2006
- 2141jkh

Very comical and orginal! Loved the VO's, they were done extremely well. The ending...what can I say....perfect..had me laughing. Great job!

Posted on March 18, 2006
- angelestes11

Pretty funny. Nice voice over.
Angel Estes
Please check out my new Movie.
Little House on the Prairie: A story of love and discipline.
Laura gets in big trouble.

Posted on March 18, 2006
- James_Diaz

Good job, Yeah, i haven't been inspired lately. Changed jobs havent had movie time. Ill try and do one before the weekend is out. I thought this was agreat film!

Posted on March 18, 2006
- Apocryphon

Short and funny, got pace and style and a 'catchphrase'!
Reviewing it as a comp entry I feel ok going the extra yard, probably would have dropped a little for repetitiveness without development if it was a full movie.

Posted on March 17, 2006
- postmodernchuck

Unlike our hero, I never had grave reservations about this film -- in fact, I was pretty enthralled with it whole way through. And did I laugh? You bet your snickers I laughed! This was clever, witty, funny, cute... well, let's just leave it at -- "I enjoyed it."

Posted on March 17, 2006
- 2005

great comedy very funny

Posted on March 17, 2006
- 1rod2huge

Nice little movie.

Posted on March 17, 2006
- Legend51

Thats fantastic. Grave reservations haha. I laughed out loud so thats 5 stars for you.

Posted on March 16, 2006
- steelblade_1

This is a cute little comedy. No obvious flaws to whine about.

I thought the plot was fine for the job it needed to do. In comedy, make them laugh is the most important thing after all.

Posted on March 16, 2006
- mb_zero

The last line was the clincher. I also liked the Crossfire line. I hope you don't have 'grave reservations' about winning.

Posted on March 16, 2006
- Quotius

A curious but amusing story of wealth and greed. That accent, vaguely Scottish as it was just made me chuckle so much - A very solid VO effort. I've no idea what was actually supposed to be going on though it has to be said!

Posted on March 16, 2006
- Arawna11

Great idea and excellent VO (one of the bests i've heard on TMO). The plot fails in some points, but I liked the entire movie.

Posted on March 16, 2006
- whydoyouwanttoknow

What they hey, 5 stars. I laughed. It was funny. I didn't look at the clock once. Well done.

Posted on March 16, 2006
- con77

i liked it

Posted on March 16, 2006

Originality:10/10 Very original

Plot/Story:7/10 Not a lot of plot here ,but entertaining.

Dialogue:9/10 Very good dialogue and VO.

Editing:9/10 Good job,no problems here.

Wow:8/10 Entertaining,but I don't know if it wowed me.Good writing and acting were the key.

43/50=4 stars

Posted on March 15, 2006
- yeagmaster

Good entry for the Chrysler comp. The grave reservations got old though. The movie didn't have much of a plot to it. The editing and VOs were superb, as always. Nice job!

Posted on March 15, 2006
- madmatt7g

You definitely should win the award for most consecutive occurences of the phrase "I have grave reservations" in a TMO film. Very silly. I enjoyed it.

Posted on March 15, 2006
- TheMGMKid1

A very funny film that will apeal to those who are married. Well ediited and paced and the ongoing joke was histerical. Great last line! Bravo and keep making more like this. A perfect adult comedy!

Posted on March 15, 2006
- ubernewbie

lol, i liked it. I felt for the women, and never found out what his reservations were.

Posted on March 15, 2006
- Fateddie

hey man very funny stuff, great accents and a compelling original storyline, a very solid little movie, good stuff.

Posted on March 15, 2006
- mollyrulz9999

That was one really funny movie. Very creative storyline, original character personalities and very good 'voice-fits-with-image-and-personality'. Keep it up!

Posted on March 15, 2006

What I like about this movie; The editing seems pretty nice, the voice overs are great for both characters, the movie is short, I like short movies. The Irish voice over was amusing...

What I didn't like about this movie; It got me to laugh, but nothings perfect. This was pretty decent though, very clean...

Just one persons opinoin.

Posted on March 15, 2006
- Lizardthing

my favorite comedian!

grats to you and your sister!! may you both continue to keep this sad community laughing!

Posted on March 15, 2006
- Ghoststalker

Ha ha, this is the second one, no?
You've changed the line: ''I don't know, 10, 20, live.''
Why? It was beautifull!
Well anyway, here are your 5 stars!

Posted on March 15, 2006
- duxy

What a funny film. It had grave reservations of shots used, and also grave reservations of editing. I also thought it had grave reservations of Voice Overs. But the story was great, and it had grave reservations. Oh yeah, i thought this film desereverd a 5 for grave reservations. But you don't understand, the film made me laugh for grave reservations...

Posted on March 15, 2006
- TexasBabe2006

Sweet Jesus, he'd drive me up a wall too with all that grave reservation crap lol. I enjoyed this movie, the arguments sounded like ones a real couple would have...very believeable.
Please review my latest "Frosaken Heart" if you have the time....Thanks in advance.

Posted on March 14, 2006
- colintucker2006

but you don't understand, i have grave reservations will be in my head all night. very good movie which i was glad to watch.
please review my latest film, rise of zombie city.
don't have grave reservations, your movie has a good chance in the contest.

Posted on March 14, 2006