Lilliths Dance
 
 
Studio: lucindamc123
 
Review Count: 8
Average Rating: 4.75 stars
Genre: Romance
Length: 4 minutes 28 seconds
 
Posted on: February 17, 2006
 
 
Film Description
I have revised my movie The Dance adding dialogue and voices. This is a simple story about Lillith, a dancer. I used extensive editing and splicing of scenes and movements and set dressing. Both give a movie more realism and dressing sets adds a lot of depth to the scenes. There are a couple of spots in the movie where the screen turns black for some reason. I worked for hours trying to find this but I could not remove it. Thanks for all the comments about my previous two versions of this story. It really helped in my revisions. Enjoy. Original music by Cajete, Milk Man Dan and J Hunour of Newgrounds.com. I did the voice acting myself.
 
Featured Reviews
- jmartin917

A bit repetitive but a decent attempt. Strangely alluring...

Posted on February 20, 2006
- MaxDragon1

Very nice

Posted on February 20, 2006
- rjb2112

Very artistic movie,the music was very fitting. It is nice to see props being used in this way.

Very touching and sensitive. You did all the VO's! I thought you did the man very well.

Posted on February 20, 2006
- PKB1

This is very different. It's not a movie as such, as more an attampt to create a piece of erotic dance art. There is a story being told here but it doesn't come clear till half way through the movie. I was very unsure about this movie at first, but when you stop looking for a story in the movie and just take it as a piece of dance work, it works well. It is let down a bit by a lot of repetitive dance moves, but this is in no way the fault of the creator, and is down to the number of scenes available in The Movies for the creator to use. Five stars for effort and attempting something very different.

Posted on February 20, 2006
- cfkwong123

too repetitive. but good movie over all.

Posted on February 20, 2006
- WishfullThinker

A good attempt. While I appreciate your attempt at making a decent dance routine using the movies, it just didn't work. The moves shown were just a bit repetitive, how many times can the girl lean back and lift her leg. The editing was pretty good, although the scene transistions were a bit strange. I understand you were doing them for effect, but it didn't quite work. The sets were very well dressed and the music was nice. The script was okay, could use a bit of tweaking. It was fairly original. Good job and keep up the good work.

Posted on February 20, 2006
- YoYoboy1

very good dressing of sets, the reason you got 4 stars, the editing was...rough, i think if you took a while longer you could no doubt achieve perfect cuts. the only thing you could change is the repetitiveness, i got really bored after the 10th time she went around that GODDAMNED BUSH!!!!! Lol, sorry, but you really lost my intrest as the repetitiveness crept i, it's hard be different and fluctuate in the movies but you have to try....

Posted on February 19, 2006
- chocolatemouse

Perfection of feminity.
Purity, weakness, sensitivity.
A very nice movie with a very daring and well done editing.

Grats

Posted on February 19, 2006
 
Reviews
- jmartin917

A bit repetitive but a decent attempt. Strangely alluring...

Posted on February 20, 2006
- MaxDragon1

Very nice

Posted on February 20, 2006
- rjb2112

Very artistic movie,the music was very fitting. It is nice to see props being used in this way.

Very touching and sensitive. You did all the VO's! I thought you did the man very well.

Posted on February 20, 2006
- PKB1

This is very different. It's not a movie as such, as more an attampt to create a piece of erotic dance art. There is a story being told here but it doesn't come clear till half way through the movie. I was very unsure about this movie at first, but when you stop looking for a story in the movie and just take it as a piece of dance work, it works well. It is let down a bit by a lot of repetitive dance moves, but this is in no way the fault of the creator, and is down to the number of scenes available in The Movies for the creator to use. Five stars for effort and attempting something very different.

Posted on February 20, 2006
- cfkwong123

too repetitive. but good movie over all.

Posted on February 20, 2006
- WishfullThinker

A good attempt. While I appreciate your attempt at making a decent dance routine using the movies, it just didn't work. The moves shown were just a bit repetitive, how many times can the girl lean back and lift her leg. The editing was pretty good, although the scene transistions were a bit strange. I understand you were doing them for effect, but it didn't quite work. The sets were very well dressed and the music was nice. The script was okay, could use a bit of tweaking. It was fairly original. Good job and keep up the good work.

Posted on February 20, 2006
- YoYoboy1

very good dressing of sets, the reason you got 4 stars, the editing was...rough, i think if you took a while longer you could no doubt achieve perfect cuts. the only thing you could change is the repetitiveness, i got really bored after the 10th time she went around that GODDAMNED BUSH!!!!! Lol, sorry, but you really lost my intrest as the repetitiveness crept i, it's hard be different and fluctuate in the movies but you have to try....

Posted on February 19, 2006
- chocolatemouse

Perfection of feminity.
Purity, weakness, sensitivity.
A very nice movie with a very daring and well done editing.

Grats

Posted on February 19, 2006