7-7
 
 
Studio: Jimbo5858685
 
Review Count: 92
Average Rating: 4.28 stars
Genre: Romance
Length: 6 minutes 9 seconds
 
Posted on: February 12, 2006
 
 
Film Description
Celebrating 1 Year Anniversery, on February 12th, 2007!!

WAS NOMINATED for Best Thriller, Best Voice Acting, and Most Emotional Movie IN THE WCP AWARDS CEREMONY ON MARCH 31ST IN THE FORUMS!!

3/28/06-NOW HOT PICK from the BEST OF ROMANCE/DRAMA at http://allboards.lionhead.com/showthread.php?t=154921

You all know the aweful day, July 7th, 2005, when London's subways were bombed. Well, this movie is be a tribute to it. I have been working REALLY hard on it, seeing as how it is technically my FIRST movie, so i want it to be spectacular. I must say, the ending really does hit your heart. Almost to the point of crying! SO, turn up your speakers, and watch it, big if you'd like!!

This is technically my first movie, seeing as how "You Like Me... Right?" was an accident. I like this movie alot though!

Please watch it all the way through, and also, realize that it had to be dramalized a little bit. Because, the explosion sounds on the war set. So it had to be arranged a bit. But i like it. Please leave honest comments!! I really hope you like it! :).

All voice overs by me (I am a guy, so it was semi difficult). It took me 2 months to do. lol. Also, for some reason there is a glitch in one spot, and also, the lip-synch isn't too good, but was perfect in the game. And the lighting is different.
 
Featured Reviews
- duxy

This movie really struck me. I love watching films from known events, especially tragedies and this one i found very appealing. What great composition involved and fantastic lead up to the actual event. Shows one of the many perspectives of this horrofic day and the story leading up to it was very coherently well executed. Full of emotions coming out from this film, it truly was a touching film and you conquered it beautifully. The characters feelings was very sympathetic to see and i feel the anguish of many heart-broker souls who lost their loved ones.
Sensitive film, and fantastic effort mate!

Posted on May 25, 2006
- WorldCriticProductions

Well well well! An excellent tribute to a tragic event that will not be forgotten in the hearts of many. Excellent voice overs, emotional torture it is, to see the retribution and sorrow the man's wife feels after the day. Nearly cried from that part, it was a shock to the heart and the dramatizing the script did work very well. Superb job, this is a WCP MUST-SEE MOVIE!

Posted on March 24, 2006
- Lizardthing

finally, a movie about a real life event! this is very good, with a sad ending..
its a bombing from one family's point of view. i think its a must see :)

Posted on March 24, 2006
- coops72

awsome movie great direction good plot I'm aloss for words this is by far the best based on a true story movie i've seen it even beats most movies i've seen in real life

Posted on February 25, 2006
- WorldPictures

From Critic's Corner hosts Jeremiah and Dr. Googlestien
Nice story of the horrible tragedy in London that day. Nice how you made it the day instead of just a fake documentary. That kept us very intrested. The tv tune part and explosion was some of the finest work we've seen on the community so far. The panic of the girl on the phone was pure genious thinking on your part. Nice little portrayal of the panic technique. Just genious on your part. It was really emotional towards the end. The VOs were some of the best. It was really sad how she found the guy dead. Really good film and it turned out better than okay. This film is going to go on and get our rare four star rating. It missed a star because of the creativity level. Meaning some mod work like things outside of the game. Custom backdrops would've really been a nice touch to this movie, 3D special effects, custom music, and custom title cards. These things seperate themselves from other films and become pretty successful. Other than that alot more people should see this. See about getting a FSN premiere. Definently good and must see.

Posted on February 13, 2006
- holdmykidney

I thought this was really impressive - good atmosphere and editing. Managed to achieve a good tone despite a lot of Movies scenes emphasising humour.

Posted on February 13, 2006
- JohnOkinawa

Wow first movie and you did a good job. Voiceovers for the female was top notch!! I loved it cuz it gave me a feeling of sympathy for your characters!!

Posted on February 13, 2006
- Killik121

That was amazing, truely touching.

Very good for a first. Mine are pretty crappy.

Posted on February 12, 2006
 
Reviews
- penguin93

Hello mate=)
Really good job. Would you mind me if i ask you to take a review at my FIRST movie, the hotel.

http://movies.lionhead.com/movie/147693

Posted on March 5, 2008
- beachard5

same thing as spielbergo92 u coulden't have got down to the subway anyway and the guy sounds just like the girl put some more thought into it before u make it

Posted on March 5, 2007
- spielbergo92

why is everyone raving about this. the voice acting was all american, and in a film about LONDON yes LONDON you'd expect to have a few english people here and there. A woman could not go down to a station where bombings had just taken place. The Underground (or "subway") is over a hundred feet beneath the surface and an explosion would not be felt. The whole thing felt so rushed and who told you you can act a male voice? Bad bad bad.

Posted on March 4, 2007
- samee

no offence but if you were tryin to make it a sad story it was more of a bad story abd the husband had a girls voice and on the day there were no gun shots or smaller explosions it was just a couple os trains expoloded and a bus or 3 a bit boring well very because well errrrrrr there is something about that that doesnt match up wat so ever maybe the fact it had not a sibgle glimps of wat happened in the subway station

Posted on January 28, 2007
- siclops

Cool movie, emotional!

Posted on December 6, 2006
- nightfire101

I'm British, I live in london, my dad saw it, this insulted me!

1st of all, its 'train station' not subway

2nd I think people actually knew which station it was

Posted on July 26, 2006
- sweatyshoulder

A good movie, put a little too dramatized. I do like your style of moviemaking though. you did a great job on this one. 5/5 All the way.

Posted on July 17, 2006
- Qurk

I'm afraid that you misrepresented this film too much to have my praise. Not only was it an American film, but it was told in a dinstinctly American way, and had no similarity to the actual events at all, really. The news report was fairly obviously made up as you went along - and not as a design feature. You clearly didn't do any research for this.

The film as a whole was perhaps good, as fiction, but the presentation and promotion was shameful, and as a consequence I am giving you a below average rating. If you make a film inspired, but not based on, actual events, say so. Do not lie. Do not make a mockery. I fear that you have been riding the public interest of the event for your own means.

Posted on June 30, 2006
- shadyginzo

much like the United 93 movie of September 11th, this movie and movies like it will always be needed to imortalise the tragedies of terrorism and make sure the unjust loss of life is never forgotten. This plot, while I assume a work of fiction, does reflect the losses so many would have experienced on that day, and as a Brit myself I feel proud to see someone with the passion to make this movie. well done

Posted on June 14, 2006
- bisonhead

This was a very good film, the voice overs were very well done and the story was great it's just a shame about the factual inaccuraies. But apart from that a great film

Posted on June 13, 2006
- NYS4

cool

Posted on June 12, 2006
- decadentpictures

This movie just goes to show you that a simple story well told can overcome any number of technicalities. Although I didn't feel there was enough complexity in it to intrigue me, this was still a very solid effort - like a painting drawn with thick brush strokes. It reminded me a little of our first movies on TMO... :)

Good job!

-sherwinliu
from Decadent Pictures

Posted on May 26, 2006
- duxy

This movie really struck me. I love watching films from known events, especially tragedies and this one i found very appealing. What great composition involved and fantastic lead up to the actual event. Shows one of the many perspectives of this horrofic day and the story leading up to it was very coherently well executed. Full of emotions coming out from this film, it truly was a touching film and you conquered it beautifully. The characters feelings was very sympathetic to see and i feel the anguish of many heart-broker souls who lost their loved ones.
Sensitive film, and fantastic effort mate!

Posted on May 25, 2006
- Cult_Inc

Tis film was well made and acted, but as a Londoner I don't think it really bore much relation to the events of that day. There's a list of inaccuracies I could bring up, but this probably isn't the best place for that, so I'll just say that it's my opinion that if you're going to tell a real-life story (especially so soon after the fact), you should at least get the facts right.

I understand that some liberties had to be taken due to the game engine, but I would have liked this more if it was a fictional bombing, inspired by the London attack, rather than an inaccurate attempt at telling the real story.

That said, it really was very well made, your portrayal of the emotions was a particular highlight.

Posted on May 13, 2006
- Kershen

just... awesome

Posted on May 4, 2006
- coolfilmer272

very good vo I don't really under stand why any one will give it lower the a 5 (every thing is there, good job)

p.s next time try to get a males voice for the male

Posted on April 26, 2006
- sgporsche48

Really great movie. A lot of movies based on events like this have to be dramatazied so it's ok.

Posted on April 26, 2006
- zeray

Nice one

Posted on April 19, 2006
- OlliEntertainment

Great movie..wow
Film on!!!

Posted on April 18, 2006
- secretweapon23

That was really good, nice idea about the london bombings and the editing was really good aswell.well earned 5 stars

Posted on April 18, 2006
- Isi361

No comment

Posted on April 16, 2006
- WPoe

That was very well done; kudos. I thought the VO was very well done.

Posted on April 16, 2006
- ZCK_legend

A very tragic movie....amde me sad...a little...but the VO's sounded the same...so Im sorry 4*.

Posted on April 15, 2006
- kate_lee

MoMc review: 3.6

I am reviewing this movie strictly on technical aspects�??storytelling, editing, vo, music, scene selection, etc.. Story-wise, there is not too much plot going on, and we don�??t really get to know any of the characters. And that was a problem for me. Music choice was ok not great. Editing generally felt right. Scene selection was a bit problematic. There should have been some rubble on the floor and more bodies lying around. But for a first movie, this was very good.

Posted on April 7, 2006
- somekindamovie

Very wellmade and well written. Would be nice with some kind of explonation of what is going on though. And you should have some male voice actors next time.

Posted on April 7, 2006
- TimBurtonFan

Interesting story and a well done movie.

Posted on April 7, 2006
- Trainwrek3

Wow this is by far the greatest movie I have seen on the movies online yet. I was wondering what was going on until I found out that it was about that horrible day in July. Keep up the excellent work.
If you could check out "The Room" in my movies.

Posted on April 6, 2006
- ElizabethSusan

A touching story that was well edited and directed!

Posted on April 6, 2006
- EricCottle

Very well made and good story!

Posted on April 3, 2006
- TheWolfska

MOMC rated = 4.2
Concept ==== 9/10 good show for a real event
Dialogue === 9/10 excellet range if you did all VO's
Production = 8/10 Subway was not damaged as much as above, needed to dress the
subway set with litter etc.
editing ==== 9/10 well done
Wow Factor = 8/10 would have had more Wow for me If the funeral would'nt have
been so long, It lasted for about 1 1/2 Minutes out of a 6
minute movie
Total ====== 42/50

Posted on April 3, 2006
- sylanderstudios06

was really good but you did make up some of the attack as no other buildings were destroyed and no gunshots but other than that amazing

Posted on April 2, 2006
- alfric

a fine tragic movie....
emotional and sad...
a few glitches in vo...
but on the whole i liked it...
look forward to your next movie..

Posted on April 2, 2006
- Stormwhitelab

Originality: 9
Editing: 8
Dialogue: 7
Story: 8
WOW Factor: 8
Overall: 40 = 4.0 stars

4.0 is 4 stars. This wasn't the best movie I've seen, it could have had much improvement. I thought that the VOs weren't very well done, because it was all the same voice. Very minimal change with any of them. Also, the story and editing lacked. Try harder next time and get more voice actors.

Posted on April 1, 2006
- DNR

Loved it great editing and superb story nicely done

Posted on March 28, 2006
- postmodernchuck

A very effective first effort -- pretty impressive, as our first impulse would be to make something less ambitious and less, well, "real." Though very moving and socially / politically insightful. I am also pretty impressed with the VO acting -- I'm pretty shocked to find out a male voice is doing so many female characters so effectively. The ending was especially poigant. The editing is somewhat shaky at times, and the sets show a general lack of customization -- but all around, an impressive first venture.

Posted on March 26, 2006
- Dulci

Good use of lighting & sets. Very touching story & a good attempt at doing it justice. You did a good job making us care about the characters. I think it would have been more powerful to show more people rushing around the subway when she goes down there. It's hard to do so many voiceovers yourself effectively. You might want to get other people involved when there is such a large cast.

Posted on March 26, 2006
- Gregg247

Excellent! This is the best film I've seen online. Very moving. It looks as good as any "real" movie could.

Posted on March 26, 2006
- kos78

A touching insight into the lives of two people on that fateful day in London.

Concept - 9 - Great concept, bonus points for making movies about real things.
Direction - 8 - Good progression through the scenes, though some of the dialogue right at the start was a big repetitive and slow.
Production - 8 - Good execution, good use of sets and fog to set the atmosphere. May have benefitted from custom backdrops to set the scene, and also custom sound effects in the background (sirens, etc) to fill in the bits that we can't see.
Character - 8 - The male and female lead were well portrayed and believable. The script for the TV announcer was not quite as believable since it wasn't written in the way that TV announcers say things.

Overall, I thought the movie was very well done and created a real affinity for the main characters. All the best for the future.

Posted on March 25, 2006
- tasmania11

touching movie.story is good.the vo is good.nice work.

Posted on March 25, 2006
- earlicus

A nice movie that shows the effect that the London bombings had on innocent civilians. Just a few minor glitches, otherwise very good.

Posted on March 25, 2006
- Egg_is_here

WOW....emmmm....i don't know what to say.....emmm..amazing kind of covers it(not)..amazing's not good enough...no word can descibe it......is it in the top 100...it should be....wow..what's that? OMG! it's a tear..a movie on TMO made me cry...i'm amazed....a movie made me cry...AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.

Posted on March 25, 2006
- WorldCriticProductions

Well well well! An excellent tribute to a tragic event that will not be forgotten in the hearts of many. Excellent voice overs, emotional torture it is, to see the retribution and sorrow the man's wife feels after the day. Nearly cried from that part, it was a shock to the heart and the dramatizing the script did work very well. Superb job, this is a WCP MUST-SEE MOVIE!

Posted on March 24, 2006
- Hoo

A good Movie. Nice plot. Nice editing. A movie that a lot more people should see.

Posted on March 24, 2006
- akinis

A fitting tribute to a very sad event. You can tell that you put alot of love and care into this movie. The Voice Over was top notch and crystal clear and so emotional! Great Job! Very touching, it really stirred up alot of emotion within me.

as far as technical, /shrug you had a few flaws but nothing major. i've noticed sometimes the game messes up when it converts it to online status (IE changing lighting / vo) but might be because we run high end computers and watch it offline with full bells and whistles turned on.

Posted on March 24, 2006
- adam262

Very emotional movie, especially the end. Some questionable editing here, few mistakes. The VO's were very nice though.

Posted on March 24, 2006
- Lizardthing

finally, a movie about a real life event! this is very good, with a sad ending..
its a bombing from one family's point of view. i think its a must see :)

Posted on March 24, 2006
- Apasas

Very well done in general. Some minor issues with sets and editing such as the battle sounds in the street and the girl in the graveyard dressed like a prostitute.

The scene when she finds her husband seems strange and out of context with the object of the film. I imagined there wouldbe more people there. But thats artistic licence for you.

Posted on March 24, 2006
- Michanist

A masterpiece. Man, it was emotional. You created a good atmosphere. Nice to see a movie about this, you did everything perfect !

Posted on March 19, 2006
- ActionRocks

No comment

Posted on March 19, 2006
- Jeremy252

Ah man, a little too emotional for me. It was a little bit cheesy towards the end, but it's still a great movie and homage.

Posted on March 14, 2006
- DFIK

Great movie. Very emotional, but sometimes I felt it got a little too corny and it made it feel a little out of tune for the rest of the film. The VO were good, aside from the husband sounding like a girl, but im sure theres nothing you could have done about that...

Overall, very good, but not quite perfect.

Posted on March 14, 2006
- sonicspiderboy

No comment

Posted on March 9, 2006
- JJPATEL

A well executed movie about the tragic events in London on that day. I felt the VO was done superb! The storyline was also very good and this is a very powerful movie and alot of time looks like have been spent creating this. Top marks overall!

Posted on March 6, 2006
- Bennettl

Great "first movie" lol. I like the plot and the Vo was good also.

Rate my movie Price Of Vengeance :)

Posted on March 3, 2006
- broken_rogers

very well done. good voices, well edited, and well writen.

Posted on March 3, 2006
- PearsonHouse

A very good first movie. VO's were excellent especially since you did them all yourself, the woman did sound like a woman.

Posted on March 2, 2006
- 02PARSIM

Now this is a powerful movie for me. I too am English and remember the impact it had on my country. While the movie might not hv the best script it certainly has memorable moments and editing of pure skill. Not only that but the Voice Overs were brilliant!

Posted on March 1, 2006
- castigo

*sings* Dude sounds like a lady *sings*

But seriously though, the movie was nicely done and all, but the weren't any explanation of what happened.... I KNOW what happened but not because ot this movie.

Posted on March 1, 2006
- Medic911

3 star script but only 1 star for the production. the vo for the news-person, although i understand what you were trying to do with it, was not pulled off well. on the plus side, i liked everything but the dream, although the dream thing could have worked itself out in a longer, 2 hour feature film. 4 stars aint bad though! please visit this site and respond to the first part of my studio description,
http://movies.lionhead.com/studio/Medic911

Posted on February 27, 2006
- Timewatch

No comment

Posted on February 26, 2006
- rjb2112

You did all the VO's! That is impressive, because I thought that a woman had done them.

As for the script, you used a lot of dramatisation. But this did have an interesting affect for me. The film does not show the reality of the situation, but it does show the emotions of how it felt.

I am English and it certainly mede me relive some of the emotions I felt at the time of the attacks.

I appreciate your tribute, to dedicate so much of your time to this.

Posted on February 26, 2006
- BigDaz

Good enough, full marks for the voices, editing etc. Only vaguely like the events of 7-7, essentially the film is about a man goes to train station and dies. Which might be accurate but not exactly entertaining.

Posted on February 25, 2006
- coops72

awsome movie great direction good plot I'm aloss for words this is by far the best based on a true story movie i've seen it even beats most movies i've seen in real life

Posted on February 25, 2006
- tigereyes

Vo needs work, newcast was bad, and some voices had improper mood, i don't see what the fuss was about, u failed to capture my emotion and u earn *** because the ending obviously tried for emotion, but in my opinion failed, i don't know if it was the poor VO's or lack or tried for emotion, but this is not a five star film

Posted on February 24, 2006
- madmatt7g

Very well written. And since it was so well-written I have to be nitpicky about a few things. Some of the vo's took me right out of the mood, especially the news broadcast. Since this is such a good movie, it deserves attention paid to every detail. If the voice overs don't sound right, or if you flub the line a little bit, you really should do it over, and over again if necessary until it sounds perfect. Otherwise, excellent story, excellent cinematography, if that word applies to this medium. Just a good movie that I'd recommend to anyone.

Posted on February 22, 2006
- Bezzer36

Delicate subject handled very well...atmospheric, emotional and given the lack of resources in the game, creative.
Interesting perspective too.

Posted on February 22, 2006
- yeagmaster

A lot of hard work went into this movie. It really touches the heart. People all over the world have different views of that day. This is one of them that could have actually been someone. Well worth the watch.

Posted on February 20, 2006
- Satansmunchkin

I find this hard to review, Being British (English) and living close to London, My sister lives in london and a lot of my friends do too and use the tubes that were hit I have a lot to say on this subject so this could get long winded:

Originality - 9 - No one has tried to takle making a film about July 7th to my knowledge, and that makes it original, however the film felt "holywoodised" it is hard to explain but it was how i imagine a holywood movie of the events would turn out...
Plot/Story - 4 - I like the idea that you focused on one persons life and how it affected them ... but the dramatisation of the events made it feel quite insulting ... I felt a more understated view of events would have been in order, especially going into the subway station ... this film is so horribly inaccurate and this is the key point as to why i found it insulting, it isn't your fault it is the limitations of TMO i know that more than anyone, but it still stands, it didn;t acknowledge the people that went down into the subways straight after ... the people that feared there would be a repeat of Madrid, but went in anyway. To forget the other people altogether seemed a bit cold ... I also had a problem with the start, i found it set the scene for the film to be a stereotypical tradgedy movie anyway ... for a story about loss and if it wasn't based on July 7th it would have been an 8 for this section.
Dialogue - 8 - The Womans VO's were fantastic, i can't fault them, The news reader seemed very wooden, I know for a fact that the people on the news were quite shocked and getting very worked up straight after the events so this didn't seem to fit, The guy struck me as being well acted though, and the woman on the phone also so this worked well.
Editing - 6 - I felt the scene selection and prop usage for this film did not do the idea justice. I can see what you were trying to do i really can but it is so hard to make a film like this with a game and even harder to make one that REALLY works
"wow factor" - 3 - I can't mark this highly, had this not been based on July 7th and was infact just a movie about the impact of terrorism on everyday people then I could have marked it more highly, it is just with July 7th i came so close to loosing a lot of people that i hold dear to me and to see a dramatised version that doesn't recognise anyone else other than the lead two people ... it just hurt me that was all. I can see the strengths of this film otherwise i wouldnt be posting a review, and as i said f this wasn't based on July 7th you'd of scored 46/50 ...

Overall - 30 = 3* I am so sorry to mark this movie the way i have, but remembering that day and how scared i was when i couldn't get hold of my sister or my friends for 5 hours after it had happened, that feeling of sheer dread and fear stayed with me and it was only by seeing the actions of the brave people who rushed in to help, who risked everything just to help strangers, even though there was a suspected risk of further bombs, that I felt hope. So to leave them out of any movie, be it a dramatisation or a documentary for me it was just upsetting.

That said the movie was well made and this is a very harsh review, because it is a subject that is very hard to convey by a movie generated in a game, that said this wasn't a bad attempt at doing that, infact had it had the above mentioned stuff it would have been an easy 5* movie :)

Posted on February 19, 2006
- sisch

I think the emotional impact of this film is great! I liked the vo especially, it conveyed real feeling, and I could hardly believe you are a guy, so real sound the women`s voices! Good work!

Posted on February 19, 2006
- bigcheese09

wow that was very deep. good job.

Posted on February 19, 2006
- plupi

Very well done. One of the best movies I have seen on the site.

Posted on February 19, 2006
- jackalbane

Very good job on this one! The only one reason I'm not giving it 5 stars is because of the ending. I felt like the ending left us hanging a bit too much, like there should have been a few final words during the funeral. Anyway, everything else I thought was very on point. I almost wanted to cry. Nice work!

Posted on February 18, 2006
- Abl

For a 6 minute movie it was quite good. Only pointers are to use more dramatic voiceovers and English accents!

Posted on February 18, 2006
- Apocryphon

I dont like reviewing movies that feature real world tragedies as I often feel I am being blackmailed into giving a good review or be seen as insulting the real life victims, but I think you did a good enough job on a story here so I can go with it. First, I thought you would have trouble conveying a sense of London within the games limitations and I was right, hard to suggest any way you could have done it better though apart from losing the American accents and idioms...it's 'the Underground' not the Subway, for instance.
Editing was good, VO was good, pace was good. Emotional involvement and mood was nicely brought out.
Decent movie, specially for a first, extra star for that.

Posted on February 18, 2006
- bumtown

a good movie especially for your first one

Posted on February 18, 2006
- nicvancamp

*****
Editing+ 1* Crisp edit
direction+ 1* well put together
story+ 1* emotional
sound+ 1* Great VO, English accent may help
set design+ 1* Nice decoration, Costumes

Posted on February 17, 2006
- erinnicole93

Forget about good for a first movie. This movie is very well-done. There's a lot of emotion and character development. Great work!!

Posted on February 16, 2006
- tomacres

very very good.

Posted on February 15, 2006
- SeRig

It's a good and serious movie.
I'm not English so I have no pictures of that subway bombing in my head, but I found the set of a whole destroyed city exaggerated. But the subway station was fine... well, that didn't match the situation I think. The VO was great, very serious and well done. Okay, the men sounds like women, but I'm synchronizing my movies alone, too. I thnik there's a lot of emotion in it.
Keep up making good movies- it's your first one and everyone of us gets better with every movie he makes.

Posted on February 14, 2006
- deenswe2003

a sad but well done movie

Posted on February 13, 2006
- Mystic_SleeT

The voice overs were awsome and although u played or the charcters it was well done.
The good use of editing and scenes makes this a worthwile movie.
5 stars and welcome to TMO.

Posted on February 13, 2006
- skarsten

For a first effort, this is really, really good. The subject matter was treated with respect, and focusing on the "human element" really worked.

As far as what kept me from giving five stars... it was pretty obvious that every character was the same actress, and it detracted from the experience a bit. Also, the news reporter wasn't quite emotional enough given that she was ground zero at a bombing - it also sounded like she flubbed several of her lines.

And, yea. The ending was good. :) Well worth the wait, I think.

Posted on February 13, 2006
- WorldPictures

From Critic's Corner hosts Jeremiah and Dr. Googlestien
Nice story of the horrible tragedy in London that day. Nice how you made it the day instead of just a fake documentary. That kept us very intrested. The tv tune part and explosion was some of the finest work we've seen on the community so far. The panic of the girl on the phone was pure genious thinking on your part. Nice little portrayal of the panic technique. Just genious on your part. It was really emotional towards the end. The VOs were some of the best. It was really sad how she found the guy dead. Really good film and it turned out better than okay. This film is going to go on and get our rare four star rating. It missed a star because of the creativity level. Meaning some mod work like things outside of the game. Custom backdrops would've really been a nice touch to this movie, 3D special effects, custom music, and custom title cards. These things seperate themselves from other films and become pretty successful. Other than that alot more people should see this. See about getting a FSN premiere. Definently good and must see.

Posted on February 13, 2006
- princeinexile

Well done good editing and V.o's...But kind of hits you in the wrong spot...

Posted on February 13, 2006
- holdmykidney

I thought this was really impressive - good atmosphere and editing. Managed to achieve a good tone despite a lot of Movies scenes emphasising humour.

Posted on February 13, 2006
- chagidiel

Ill give you an extra star, for this being your first work. As a starter its great. (much better then my first)

You choosen a difficult topic, which is indeed hard to make a movie about under normally circumstances, and oh so much harder here at TMO.

Your editing skills are great. You have some great esatlishing shots.
The movie felt well thought trough, and the pacing was good.
A couple of things that was noticeble:

The acting skills on some VO felt forced. Try getting other VO actors, so you dont have to do them all yourself. Its one of those things tkat takes away the audience attention.

The music, during the main characters phone call, felt much to dramatic, for the situation. Some other music would have been better.

You know that you can turn off the background sound effects, in order to not let there be sounds of machineguns at the London streets...?

Posted on February 13, 2006
- JohnOkinawa

Wow first movie and you did a good job. Voiceovers for the female was top notch!! I loved it cuz it gave me a feeling of sympathy for your characters!!

Posted on February 13, 2006
- Melghoul1

I think it is terrible for some one to make a movie based on a real life disaster. Unoriginal. plot was boring. editing horrible. the woman doing the VOs was the best thing.

Posted on February 13, 2006
- Krazymalicous

It's OK but the VO's were a bit off sometimes. The guys sounded like they were gay, and the news reporter sounded like she was improvising her speech. But it was a good effort.

Posted on February 12, 2006
- Killik121

That was amazing, truely touching.

Very good for a first. Mine are pretty crappy.

Posted on February 12, 2006
- RonH

I thought it was real good for what you had to work with, however I couldn't believe that your movie was set in London because the accents were all American lol. Besides that I believe it was a good movie that touched the heart. And yes it was alittle dramatized.

Posted on February 12, 2006
- vader

It's all too real, first the Trade center and now the london subway. You kept me into the story, good usage and VO ( try to get a male voice though it helps) Now I would like to see her go renegade and kill the towel head camel humpers. Oh and draw funny photos of Muhommad

Posted on February 12, 2006