Red Line
 
 
Studio: Milarky
 
Review Count: 21
Average Rating: 3.38 stars
Genre: Sci-Fi
Length: 3 minutes 9 seconds
 
Posted on: January 18, 2006
 
 
Film Description
Original Sci-Fi Western Story, fast pased suspense filled adventure! lip sync and voice over

Lots contradictory words from my last reviewer can you do better?

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Review questions answered
0.01) I as i re watch i realy can not under stand where people are getting who is confused talking. the only bit must eb the clerk pulling the gun, but thing that miss time is due to the online export...
they are cleanest voice overs i've done.
they lip sync is hard to see becuase fo the online quality.

0.1) voice over are lip synced with the right click option but i thinkthe web version distorts the sounds lot of people ave this problem
0.2) never heard of the movie come on is it online? or is it real life movie i did the yeehar for the hell of it becuase i was happy id finished!
1)VO's hard to follow? well i am the only voice actor at the momment planning on tweeking normal voice with software to get more a a varriation for the
future.
2)Why did Annie/Josie.(another mistake) hit the captian?
that was supposed to be the sherrif using the captain as a sheild, theres just not range of motion i need to pull it off well it was supposed to bea comedy momment
3)Story improve! its a 2 min episode with it was 45 min like buffy or firefly then the story could be explored more.
4) whats the story
2 crew ship takes on illgal work to steel an unknown something from a bank,
thinking if the leave the money in the bank and only take the item they will not be chased to much for to long. its a small outter rim world.
Capt. pretends to help stop a robbery, but use'd witty guile to trick the banker in to giveing him what he wants.
(again small moive not much time for convosation + to much vo with my self woudl be hard to follow) thats why the 2 voice mostly used are easily destinguishable.
after pulling off the heist, the pair encounter the sherrif on the way back to the ship.
Jose accidently hits capt, while tryign to help, but eventualy over comes the sherrif KO.
Jose is distraught she commited a crime.

next episode the ramifications and the crime underworld.

Boring even when you think of these questions, you do think they will go back to honnest work(NO)?
who is the captians criminal contact?
if the sherrif survived wount he give chase?
 
Reviews
- Floyd_31

Originaliy : 5/10. I always say that originality is important if you want your film to work, this one was original but in a bad way. It becomes bad when you try to go "too" original.

Plot/Story : 4/10. Not an impressive story as the one I was expecting. I thought : "Wow...a Sci-Fi Western...that better be interesting !" But I guess not.

Subtitles/VO's : 5/10. Sure it's a good thing to add VO's but it's too hard for people to understand who's talking (I say this all the time but try using Audacity). And then, I had another problem, I just couldn't understand what they were saying !

Editing : 5/10. This one did pretty bad too. Usually, with Sci-Fi films this is the best part but again...not with this film. There must have been at least 10 scenes where I thought "No...Why do you use THAT scene ??".

"Wow ME Effect" : 4/10. Well, I guess you now get that this movie really wasn't good. I've seen worse but....that's about it.

OVERALL : 23/50. You signed the Guest Book at MovieWood so you could get your movie reviewed on an honest and detailled way...here it is.

Posted on January 24, 2006
- Alexei18

I just didn't find it interesting...I was simply very bored throughout. I'm just being honest so don't take it the wrong way. Good luck witht the movie-making. :)

Posted on January 22, 2006
- chaosllama

That was pretty good but you could have added a bit more to the story... and if you are having trouble with girl VOs, then try not to have that many girls in it (Vice Versa if your a girl) But it seemed fairly well done! And i'm sry but were u copying the movie "Come On" with that YEEHAA? or were u just doing it for the hell of doing it?!? LOL, who cares! But a tip for yer: Try making the actors lips move in sync with what you say... its not that hard; all you have to do is right click the VO u want to be synced and then select the actor for it to link to! Its easy and makes it easier to tell whos talkin'!!!
Keep on truckin' ;)

Posted on January 22, 2006
- IamaCoommee

average, but good VO

Posted on January 22, 2006
- Smookey

1 Orignal
Could not give more..sorry:SAnd you want a 2nd episode:S

Posted on January 22, 2006
- BigDaz

A weeny bit hard to follow but good all the same.

Posted on January 22, 2006
- cmaag

No comment

Posted on January 22, 2006
- penfjj

Story +2
Editing: +2
VO or subtitles: +1
Music: +1
Overall: +1
Deductions: -4

Posted on January 21, 2006
- sarek13

Good Movie

Posted on January 21, 2006
- Meowan

Pretty Well Interesting :D

please watch my movie: Test of Courage - Directors Cut ;)

Posted on January 21, 2006
- nicvancamp

No comment

Posted on January 20, 2006
- TimBurtonFan

Interesting!

Posted on January 19, 2006
- Wizairde

Pretty interesting

Posted on January 19, 2006
- brandonW

voice over weren't too bad(exept that the only time you sound the like a woman was at end with the yeeeaaah ;)) off-worlders robbing a bank??????strange choice but this was a solid movie.

Posted on January 19, 2006
- mica59700

It's pretty well done and...funny !!

Posted on January 19, 2006
- garder6

its good your mic is fine

Posted on January 18, 2006
- FraSte

VO're a little hard to follow.

Posted on January 18, 2006
- NghtStlkr

The VOs for Annie could use some work. Also, why was she beating up the Captain when the sheriff grabbed him?

Posted on January 18, 2006
- steve1982

ok story could be improved by next episode, still very good effort, VO's need looking at I think. enjoyed it though

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Posted on January 18, 2006
- Chang

Not bad. I found some of the VO's a little hard to follow and the plot seemed a bit thin. The character depth was not really explored in this movie, but the whole thing was nicely put together.

Posted on January 18, 2006
- danielbarber

well done its a good movie

Posted on January 18, 2006