Motions 11
 
 
Studio: made2kill
 
Review Count: 21
Average Rating: 3.43 stars
Genre: Comedy
Length: 3 minutes 59 seconds
 
Posted on: December 29, 2005
 
 
Film Description
When Lanny Motion watches the movie "Oceans 11" he gets what he thinks a stunning idea. Can him and his friends succesfully pull off a bank robbing heist. Findk out in this comedy.

This is only my 3rd movie and first comedy. when i made it i didnt have a mic for voice overs but i do now, this leads to the font of the charictors being hard to read. if i get enough rep on this movie i will consider remaking it with upgraded music and voice overs. and for those that want to know i am under 18... not a kid so dont be thinking thay im anywhere from 5-13 (just saying)
 
Reviews
- Michanist

Didn't find it that great. I've already saw more funny movies. The movie was also rather slow. The rythm should be higher and the subtitles were hard to read at times. But keep making entertaining movies.

Posted on January 1, 2006
- kaipan

Nice work! keep trying!

Posted on January 1, 2006
- ashlandt

I like the idea of the story, but some of the editing was a little rough, and the subtitles definitely need to stay up longer, didn't have time to read most of them. And, if we're gonna do subtitles, we need to make sure we're using proper grammar and spelling. Good effort though, I look forward to seeing more!
I'll view yours if you view mine...

Posted on January 1, 2006
- xsr1000

Nice way to show us who was speeking (font type) but the storie was not to amusing. And the conversations cinda sucked xD. It also was hard to read all the subtitles. But, yeah it was not such a bad movie so...

3 stars

Posted on January 1, 2006
- JohnOkinawa

Subtitles were a little hard to read and I didn't like it when the music stopped. Good overall. Nicejob.

Posted on December 31, 2005
- northmeister

Nice work. Some of the subtitles hard to read online.

Posted on December 31, 2005
- drybeanburrito

Not to shabby, the story is kinda funny, but you could do some work on the smaller details, polish it a little more and bring out the best out of it.

Posted on December 31, 2005
- Suladead

Good work. I like the new angle on the bank robbing sort. It was entertaining for a bit. The ending was nice, kind of "black comedyish".

- Suladead, Darkshade Productions

Posted on December 31, 2005
- AgentSmith

Hm...I don't know...I give it 4 Stars because some moments were very funny

Posted on December 31, 2005
- Cimmerz

You're already aware of the hard to read font in areas, but there was also some spelling errors here and there. The story and editing was fine. Overall, not bad, I'd just work on proofing things such as music and subtitles before releasing.

Posted on December 31, 2005
- sarek13

Good

Posted on December 30, 2005
- cerwyngilasbey

That was ok, the other reviewers have already posted what I had to say. Nice Idea.. That was fine, shame about the constant changing fonts on the subtitles. But hey my first movie was apalling.

Posted on December 30, 2005
- Janda75

Plot development 4/5 - I like the whole bank robbing copy of ocean's eleven,thing, but most of the jokes wern't that funny.

Music/Sound effect 2/5 - I liked the song, but ya the music stopping, was a bad thing.

Editing 4/5 - It was a good job

genre fit 4/5: it wasn't that funny but it was a comedy

Final Score: 14/20

Posted on December 30, 2005
- rjb2112

Not really funny enough to be a comedy, maybe should have been in action. The only funny bit for me was the, if we're really scary bit. If your under 18, give yourself an extra star.

Posted on December 30, 2005
- Raptor007

Base Value: 3
Yes the idea was good. +2
The music stopped long before the end -1
The use of different subtitles, most hard to read -1
Some subtitles too fast -1
Well cut +1
TOTAL: 3

Posted on December 30, 2005
- Sir_Goose_Productions

Character development 4/5 - the characters were entertaining for this type of a film, voice overs would really help though

Plot development 3/5 - I've seen other movies like this but it was fun to watch

Music/Sound effect 3/5 - I think it'd work better with a different tune for the most part, I didnt feel the music fit the scenario a lot of the time.

Editing 4/5 - well cut for the most part

Final Remarks: It's a fun film to watch, more control of the mood through music and voice overs would definately help though.

Final Score: 14/20 = 4 stars

Posted on December 30, 2005
- uwe1965

Good movie! Really funny!

Posted on December 29, 2005
- PhantomRaulStudios

Cute, mildy funny. Good writing, simple, easy to follow plot.

Best part: The cashier whipping out the launcher.
Worse part: The first half dragged.

Posted on December 29, 2005
- PamDennis

Got a kick outta this one

Mine... The Bank Job!

Posted on December 29, 2005
- Soulsword

Cute. Original. But changing the fonts on the other characters made it alnost impossible to read. Think the book he read should have been The Dummies Guide to Bank Robberies. Just a thought.

Posted on December 29, 2005
- Ryan33

good movie

Posted on December 29, 2005