GANGSTA21
 
 
Studio: claw21
 
Review Count: 54
Average Rating: 3.59 stars
Genre: Action
Length: 5 minutes 59 seconds
 
Posted on: December 24, 2005
 
 
Film Description
IMPOTANT THIS IS MY FIRST MOVIE THAT I RELEASED ON TMO
sorry but the subs are really fast, i know, but it was my first movie,YOU MIGHT WANT TO PAUSE THE FILM TO READ THEM, SORRY BUT I PROMISE THEY GET BETTER WITH EACH OF MY FILM.

what do you do when your best friend put you in jail and your turf has been taken by some punk.


You take revenge and leave no one for mercy

the second and the final are now released check them both out

thanks for the reviews

GANGSTA:Hostile II
http://movies.lionhead.com/movie/32979
the sequal to GANGSTA " Great sequel!!" by Blackstorm 5 stars

GANGSTA:REVENGE III
http://movies.lionhead.com/movie/48963
third part, "The gangster story concludes." kos78
 
Featured Reviews
- smithovich

movie was ok, but afew mistakes, the subs were faster then superman himself, and in the trian scene it sounded like someone was sleeping (zzzzz), but you had some good scenes, but its ok for a first movie.

Posted on October 26, 2006
- erinnicole93

Well i can read VERY fast, but for others the titles do need to be slower. Also some of the scenes need to be edited down a little. Please turn off the mumbling sims. I think also there needs to be some sort of music in some of the later parts. But it is a good story and not many people are doing this genre.

Posted on January 22, 2006
- Eckhard

you need to correct the spelling mistakes!!

Posted on January 22, 2006
- Blackstorm

Good job,only one thing tho,subtitles were going to fast,i had to d/l the movie and pause to read it :) But Good Work!

Posted on January 21, 2006
- RiskdaMasta

nice story...
please watch my movie: That aint no way to treat a lady, it has voiceovers
http://movies.lionhead.com/movie/44880

Posted on January 21, 2006
- Fischii

good movie

Posted on January 17, 2006
- DocWatson

WOOHOO! Glad I can read FAST!

Posted on January 14, 2006
- N8Wolf

Good Story! Subs sometimes to fast!

Posted on January 12, 2006
- ProjectX

Not a bad movie, although i'm not sure the music was appropriate for the style. Acid Bass is probably more suitable to Sci-Fi Action scenes.

Posted on January 2, 2006
- bluedhift

Not bad, the subtitle's where a bit fast but not a bad story line.
Shirts In Hands Up-based on a true story.
http://movies.lionhead.com/movie/30201

Posted on December 29, 2005
- paintball31390

good movie the subtitles were a little short though good story

rate my movie please http://movies.lionhead.com/movie/25627

Posted on December 24, 2005
 
Reviews
- atora

i would've gave it a four but cause its your first film, and because of that other review, i thought i'd bump it up to 5

Posted on March 22, 2008
- claws21

oh wow... every one this is my firs movie please rate 5 stars, pease, please,.... this movie sucks BALLS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 i cant believe any one would rate this crap

Posted on July 14, 2007
- ESegal

For a first movie this is a definite 4 star.

VO/Sub 1/5 - There were no VOs, but there were subtitles, and usually they were readable.
Music 2/5 - The sound track sort of faded off at some point.
Sound effects 1/5 - It's unfortunate, with sound effects this would have been a 5 star movie. However, instead, I heard snoring in the background while Drake and the other guy. And, I heard mumbling in the background, which is just dumb =P

Plot 4/5 - It was really good. It would have been 5, but the ending was just a drop off.
Script 5/5 - The characters were well constructed and cool.

Costuming is a definite bonus to this movie. Normally I'd give it 3 stars, but since it's a first movie, I'm giving it 4. (Even though you've made others since this one)

Posted on July 6, 2007
- draklowe

a ok film the story was ok but the subs were way to fast, nice film for a first one

Posted on November 28, 2006
- CorpsehereProductions

not bad for a first. you already know what to work on by now.
so keep up the good work.

Posted on October 27, 2006
- THROWAXE

Your typical first movie, but a nice attempt at bringing the story.
A funny soundtrack, though, I had snoring halfway through :D
Keep up the good work.

Posted on October 27, 2006
- derbyrams

For your first movie on tmo I must say a very good effort, my first movie was really bad compared to this, which of course i'm saying this as a compliment as your first movie is really good!! Very good use of subtitles, some were a bit too fast like u said, but I got into this movie and I enjoyed it! there might of been a few flaws here and there, but I enjoyed the movie, a good plot!! nice work!!!

Posted on October 27, 2006
- tomasm

As you know by now the subtitles passed by too fast. But it was not that hard to follow the story anyway, and I did enjoy the actual story. But what about that snoring sound in the subway? It din't make any sense, especially since there was no fighting sounds :D
Quite decent movie, but you show that you've developed since this movie :)
Good!

Posted on October 27, 2006
- FunkyFilms

I couldn't follow this at all. The subtitles - I didn't even realize them.

Posted on October 27, 2006
- OlliEntertainment

Good movie...
Subtitles run too fast.......

Film on!!

Posted on October 27, 2006
- Benj123

You did an okay job except there were spelling errors and the subs were fast.

Posted on October 27, 2006
- jamestkirk

Good first upload! Its odvious a lot of time and energy went into this film. I might have given you 3 stars for the subtitle issue, but you warned about it in your description, which is good, i too made the same mistake in my first couple movies. Two main things hurt this movie: Some of the sound effects seemed a bit too random, and misplaced, and the lack of soundtrack toward the end of the movie hurt it a bit. For a first upload this was DEFINETLY a great film! Practice will reveal that you have an awesome talent for TMO! I look forward to seeing more of your films in the future. ROCK ON!!!!

Posted on October 26, 2006
- zogo1

A good first movie! very good, good luck in your future movies

Posted on October 26, 2006
- sweatyshoulder

I really don't like subtitles and I think you should work on maybe thhrowing in some VOs. For me it wasn't so much that they were fast its just they're boring. Anyway that might make this 3 a four. Nice job though.

Posted on October 26, 2006
- PearsonHouse

Quite a fast paced action movie which I found interesting. You were right about the subtitles they were a bit too fast, I managed to read most of them though. Excellent attempt at a first movie. Keep up the good work!

Posted on October 26, 2006
- DoubleMPee

The first part of this movie is great.. But shen the movie gets a bit boring, I even heard myself snoring. no wait that was the .. music?? The action scenes had no sound.. A pity since you started the movie so good... Was that a blizzard in the bar at the end of this movie? It sure sounded so... The subs are a bit to fast slow them down in your next movie.
I give you 3 stars since I think you can do better then that!

Posted on October 26, 2006
- brainiac2005

The subs were faster than a speeding bullet. There wss no music in the later parts of the movie.

Aside from that, very good movie.

Posted on October 26, 2006
- cruleworld

GreaT JoB

Posted on October 26, 2006
- smithovich

movie was ok, but afew mistakes, the subs were faster then superman himself, and in the trian scene it sounded like someone was sleeping (zzzzz), but you had some good scenes, but its ok for a first movie.

Posted on October 26, 2006
- Metropolis

Very well done.

Posted on August 6, 2006
- Leora

The subs were way too fast in places, and were full of mistakes. Often I had no idea what was meant to be happening, it often felt completely random. Didn't grab my attention, had to make myself concentrate on what was happening (this is mainly personal taste, however, so don't worry about it too much). The music stopped halfway through, which is a common mistake. And you should put a warning about how far off the sound effects are, I know it's a common problem, but I was sitting here for several minutes wondering why all I could hear was snoring, when what was happening on screen had nothing to do with snoring. I won't deduct points for the sound problems- as I said, they're common, and as far as I know, unavoidable...

Posted on May 13, 2006
- deenswe2003

kos78's review of this movie is spot on. So i will defer to it.

Posted on May 11, 2006
- kos78

A gangster is set up by his friend, then breaks out of jail to set things right.

The subs were significantly too fast. Watch the capitalization on the subs, and appropriate punctuation. After the first song finished the lack of music killed the atmosphere a bit. Also the lack of sound effects detracted from the atmosphere. The major scene transitions may have benefitted from transitional shots (e.g. pans across a nice backdrop). The plot seemed fairly standard.

Overall, I thought this movie was a fairly standard action plot. All the best for the future.

Posted on May 10, 2006
- Timo666

Nice basic action movie. Nothing too special though! 3.5 stars rounded up to 4

The subtitles disappeared a bit to quick!

Posted on May 9, 2006
- kirkybaby

nice story. just going to watch others now
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Posted on February 4, 2006
- millahnna

Catching up with this trilogy all in one batch right now. This is a really solid start for the most part. Major recommendations would be to polish up the dialogue a bit and kill the mumbles. I noticed some miscellaneous sound effects that didn't seem to go with the action, though a few seemed like game glitches. This is defintely a setup story, but there's still a decent amount of action going on. And the plot seems to be fairly complex. Good work.

Posted on January 31, 2006
- FLIPMANBURN

The subs need major work, but don't feel bad, I had the same problems with one of my flims to. The overall story was good, but the edit needs a more grittier, city feel to it. The music felt like it didn't fit with vibe of the movie either. This was a good movie, but there's alot room for improvement.
Don't forget to check out SICKOID FLICKS!

Posted on January 31, 2006
- Davidwww

I wont repeat what the others have said, I'll just say good effort

Posted on January 29, 2006
- Ryan33

good job

Posted on January 23, 2006
- Haes

3 and a half stars but we'll round up. I feel like a record sometimes. Subtitles too fast, need voice overs, no background music in most of the movie (a must to set the mood). This is a new one for me, the ambiant noise is messed up. Probably happened during your upload. Kinda funny to here snoring during the subway fight scene though.

Posted on January 23, 2006
- erinnicole93

Well i can read VERY fast, but for others the titles do need to be slower. Also some of the scenes need to be edited down a little. Please turn off the mumbling sims. I think also there needs to be some sort of music in some of the later parts. But it is a good story and not many people are doing this genre.

Posted on January 22, 2006
- Eckhard

you need to correct the spelling mistakes!!

Posted on January 22, 2006
- madmatt7g

story was good, but subtitles a little fast.

Posted on January 22, 2006
- Blackstorm

Good job,only one thing tho,subtitles were going to fast,i had to d/l the movie and pause to read it :) But Good Work!

Posted on January 21, 2006
- RiskdaMasta

nice story...
please watch my movie: That aint no way to treat a lady, it has voiceovers
http://movies.lionhead.com/movie/44880

Posted on January 21, 2006
- Fischii

good movie

Posted on January 17, 2006
- Nigel_Rowe

let down a bit by the fast subtitles, but good effort neverthless

Posted on January 15, 2006
- SAAZUKA

Great story. Maybe have the subtitles stay up a little longer and add some sound effects? For example the phone ringing toward the end. You could have found a sound effect of a phone ringing and stuck it in there. :) Great work otherwise.

Posted on January 15, 2006
- plupi

The story and the scenes are good. The characters costumes are also good. I needed a speed reading class first to read the subtitles. And maybe it's me, but I thought during a talking scene I heard snoring!

Posted on January 15, 2006
- DocWatson

WOOHOO! Glad I can read FAST!

Posted on January 14, 2006
- N8Wolf

Good Story! Subs sometimes to fast!

Posted on January 12, 2006
- Primaer

It was good that you didn't make to much subtitles, some people make subtitles on positions where no person really would talk e.g. when the guy broke out of the jail. But the whole other movie didn't get me really.

Posted on January 11, 2006
- WARSTOMP

you didont take advantage of sounds but its alright.

Posted on January 3, 2006
- Prinzess

Story wise it was good but very hard to follow with the quite fast subs.
The qsound troubles you were experiencing have not helped. But these are minor technicalities :)
I urge you to keep fiddling with the movie controls and see what you can do :)

Posted on January 2, 2006
- Danielewicz

subtitle fast but ok story

Posted on January 2, 2006
- moviedragon5000

good story, but needs work to realize

Posted on January 2, 2006
- SHERWINLIU

Not bad, decent story and interesting characters. But the sound and music problems were heavily distracting. The music stopped halfway through the movie, and the sound seemed to be out of sync by a long stretch.

Posted on January 2, 2006
- ProjectX

Not a bad movie, although i'm not sure the music was appropriate for the style. Acid Bass is probably more suitable to Sci-Fi Action scenes.

Posted on January 2, 2006
- scyride

a good movie but not number one!

Posted on January 2, 2006
- bluedhift

Not bad, the subtitle's where a bit fast but not a bad story line.
Shirts In Hands Up-based on a true story.
http://movies.lionhead.com/movie/30201

Posted on December 29, 2005
- Brokienheart

An average movie overall. The subtitles were too fast to read, therefore making the storyline uncomprehensible. Also the music cut off half-way and sounded like there was snoring the middle of the movie. Sound effects during fights were non-existant.

If you are going to have the subtitles moving that fast, I would strongly recomend VO's for your next movies. Even a cheap mic and a few friends for multiple VO's will do. Keep plugging at it!

Posted on December 28, 2005
- Scrogdog

I agree with both of the other reviews that I have seen.

The subtitles are too short in duration and the sound is not good. I struggled to explain the snoring sounds in one part. :)

This is not quite a 4 star movie. I wish I could give 3.5 but 4 will have to do.

Posted on December 28, 2005
- DavidSS

i hope you will put voice in next film. The sound isnt soo good, its out of scene. Tell me when you have new film. Its your second film then i give you 4 stars fot it- Bookmark my film of Intiana if you like it.

Posted on December 24, 2005
- paintball31390

good movie the subtitles were a little short though good story

rate my movie please http://movies.lionhead.com/movie/25627

Posted on December 24, 2005