Word of the Day
Review Count: 18
Average Rating: 4.17 stars
Length: 2 minutes 12 seconds
Posted on: December 14, 2005
Hello. This is my sedond uploaded film(Techinically. My first one was just a test). Please note I am notdoing one of these every day. That was just the title, although I do expect to make more of these.
Also, I made a few subtitle errors, but it is still easyb to understand everything.
I hope you enjoy.
Update-Episode 2: Now in prduction! Be sure to watch it when it releases, MOST LIKELY TONIGHT!
I'd also love to thank all the reviewers. These reviews mean a lot to me.
Episode 2 has been relased for a day now. View it by going to my studio page. It is titled "Word of the Day 2." Thank you.
You only show the dark side of alcool
I hope for the next episode you are going to be a jedy and show the light side
It was a nice try for a first movie
Posted on February 17, 2006
A good idea STX.
You done a good and clean job of editing. But more dare in the scenes and cuts could have added more interest and spice. I guess that a second gaze on it would have helped you to add the small spice.
Anyway an interesting movie;
Posted on February 14, 2006
Mostly I have to agree with RPOSHARD.
-Turn off the mumbling next time.
-Good idea, but it could have been fleshed out ab it more.
-Name dropping: I got Homer Simpson but who is Peter Griffin ?
Overall, a great original idea (kinda TMO Sesame Street) I'm sure you can turn into some real good comedys with a little more work.
You are definitively on the right track here!
Posted on February 14, 2006
Originality -- 7/10 -- It was an original idea, but showed little originality in its execution.
Plot/Story -- 5/10 -- Not much of a plot to it, I'm afraid. You may feel your basic concept might have hindered you from having a plot, whereas I felt there was so much more that could be done.
Dialogue -- 6/10 -- Standard dialogue. Not particularly funny for a comedy. ST work was adequate, though it was rushed in a few places.
Editing -- 7/10 -- Not a bad job of editing, just a few jumps and wobbles. PERSONAL PET PEEVE TIME: Turn off the mumbling! It is very distracting while watching a movie.
Wow factor -- 3/10 -- Your movie did almost nothing for me. I didn't find it particularly funny. You will learn that comedy is a very subjective commodity -- not everyone thinks my movies are funny either.
28/30 -- 3 stars. This does NOT mean I think this is a bad movie -- I think it is a good movie that with work could be a GREAT movie. Keep working at it!
Posted on February 13, 2006
Yep, that just about sums up the word drunk.
Amusing little comedy, and well made. Shows why drinking is bad.
Jush one mors forsh sha road, hic!
Posted on February 12, 2006
I liked it. Funny.
Nice mentioning of Homer Simpson and Peter Griffin (both of which are very funny people).
Great, loved it.
Onwards to Word of the Day 2!
Posted on February 7, 2006