The Outlaws
 
 
Studio: teeoil
 
Review Count: 23
Average Rating: 3.91 stars
Genre: Action
Length: 13 minutes 39 seconds
 
Posted on: November 17, 2005
 
 
Film Description
This is my first movie I post online, and I'm very proud of it ^_^
It's the story of a band of outlaws, which include Mad dog Clint, Jenny Gunn, Foulmouth Machio and that poor Billy. Enjoy! and feel free to leave any comment so I can make an improvement in my next movie.
 
Reviews
- AaronApril7

Very good!!!! Keep Doin what your doin!!

Posted on November 21, 2005
- Tarison

I liked it, especially considering it was your first movie. I'm sure there'll get better as you go along.

Posted on November 19, 2005
- LuciusVorenus

Excellent movie! I like the way you set up the characters with a bar fight. The build up to the heist was cool. It was like a western versino of Ocean's Eleven. I loved the ending and the bit about the gold taking the bullet.

Too many awkward music shifts and the sad music in the bank I thought was inappropriate. Also, you should have turned off the character screams, welps, etc. The instant transition from chase to showdown didn't work for me.

Posted on November 18, 2005
- dquad

Sorry, but I couldn't get past the grammar and spelling. If you're going to make a subtitle-only film, make the subtitles legible and understandable, so that the viewer "doesn't realize he's reading them." Every single mistake pulls the viewer out of the viewing experience, and after about 3 or 4 (45 seconds in, maybe), it's too much. Maybe English isn't your first language, and apologies for offense if it isn't, but lots of people here post different language movies, you could too.

Posted on November 18, 2005
- Pauks

be very proud of yourself for your first movie i was tempted to give you my second 5 star but it wasnt perfect, editing could of been improved here and there but the main downfall was the start of the film it wasnt a good start but it got better and the ending was nicely done 4 stars definatly

Posted on November 18, 2005
- PLTucker

A good western flick. Not my cup of tea in general, but well made and a decent story. The only letdown is the sometimes dodgy dialogue.

Had I been a Western fan, I'd give it 3 1/2 :)

Posted on November 18, 2005
- FilmForge_Studios

there simply isn't anything else to say; excellent western

Posted on November 17, 2005
- Darkfox3889

Very nice movie! Only thing holding it back from 5 stars were the many errors in the subtitles. Just grammar check your subtitles more in your next movie.
Please review back :)
http://movies.lionhead.com/studio/Darkfox3889

Posted on November 17, 2005
- Tman

Pretty long movie, but a pretty decent one. Keep up the good work man.

Posted on November 17, 2005
- ATLAS_550

Felt like a western.. Tasted like a western.. And is one of the best movies I have seen!

Posted on November 17, 2005
- maxzilla2005

A memorable Western.

Posted on November 17, 2005
- msaeluk

I'm not a big western fan but you managed to keep my attention through the whole movie. Added comedy value from the sub-titles too, though I know that wasn't your intention.

Posted on November 17, 2005
- PierrePiper

Loved the film one of the best westerns

Posted on November 17, 2005
- MissHide

Really nice film with a nice story. Very good the film editing and good technique.

Posted on November 17, 2005
- rzepak

Wow thats all there is to say. It is probobly the best movie Ive seen so far. The scenes fit great, thanks to your writing the characters actually have personality.
I love western and your movies certainly had that specific atmosphere thanks partly to the music, which fit throughout the whole movie. Since I dont care for a voice over if its not done right im happy to give you 5 stars.

Posted on November 17, 2005
- Wallberg

Well done. Western is not my cup of tea, but hey, but this one was very nicely made. Some voices would have helped it for me though.

Posted on November 17, 2005
- adam262

I loved this movie. By far my favorite Western yet! It kept me glued and I loved all the characters. Mad Dog is a pimp man! Great ending too! Favorite part was when all the sheriffs men were surrounding the bank and of course the shootout and when that guy on they rooftop was killed was the best part.

Posted on November 17, 2005
- chaotix66

WTF! 13 mins. damn. 17 was the most iv'e seen. The film editing is very good and the music fits well. For a long movie like this, VO is the way to GO. Great film

Posted on November 17, 2005
- Flashman1972

Nice Movie - I love Westerns and this one definatly appealed to me...had a nice story line and was well edited but I agree with the guy who said that it mabye would have been best as a 60's or 70's film.... thats only a minor drawback though.

Like the main character aswell... Good work!

Posted on November 17, 2005
- VARDER_KIFTEN

Not bad, though it is another western.

Posted on November 17, 2005
- ERICIST

Great techinque, but the dialogue left a bit to be desired.

Posted on November 17, 2005
- a2k13

the shots are all 1 or 2 bars fights quite good sound effects but suffers in 2 things the film should have realy be made in the late 60s early 70s and not enounge sounds effects when Billy dies and shot off is very predibtle and the first 5 mins we not that good,this film has a good ending but the first 5 minutes make the film a little doomed.

Posted on November 17, 2005
- Aashh

Very well directed and written.... all it was missing was a voice track!

Posted on November 17, 2005