Ryders on a Storm Pt1
 
 
Studio: castlenaze
 
Review Count: 18
Average Rating: 3.39 stars
Genre: Action
Length: 3 minutes 49 seconds
 
Posted on: November 16, 2005
 
 
Film Description
First episode of a possible mini series about a guy who goes on a revenge rampage. Why? Check it out and see.

Warning: Contains strong language.

My first attempt on Movies online. Great fun. Please excuse any inconsistancies and continuity errors. Also note: The main character's name is Joe Ryder, not Joe Blue as stated.
 
Reviews
- Prinzess

awww what a sad film. I will be sure to watch part 2.

Posted on January 1, 2006
- Ryz0283

Good choice of scenes, and I like the story (although how did she get killed??). The editing could do with some tightening up but I look forward to the next in the series!

Posted on December 4, 2005
- rulksterlove

Wow. Watching your movie making only confirms my inabilities at it. Great editing and great story telling. I have seen those scenes a hundred times (I played through tycoon twice and finished it both times). But I have not seen them put together like that.

That is why I love this game. Sure you do not have total control over scenes but you have enough to make what you can imagine a reality. And maybe not having too many pre-rendered scenes makes your imagination stronger cause you really have to think and improvise when scripting, filming, PP, and then uploading your movie.

Great Job on this one. I liked Bad Day just a little bit more though.

Posted on December 2, 2005
- riksmiff

Very slick, entertaining and interesting build-up. Makes you want for more !

Posted on December 1, 2005
- Satansmunchkin

Good show, I liked it, lacked a little punch to make it great though! Thumbs up i liked it!

Posted on November 30, 2005
- audacity

I didnt actually watch your movie yet, i will, but i just wondered why you said all that nice stuff about my movie but yet only gave it a 4? What was it missing? is it the voice overs? is that why im not getting many 5's? well you get 4 stars even if your movie sucks hehe but I AM going to watch it so dont worry!

Posted on November 27, 2005
- whatisrebus

Looking forward to what happens next. Keep up the good work.

Posted on November 23, 2005
- Ace_24

Not bad, I'm hanging for episode 2.

Posted on November 22, 2005
- TOFTEVILLE

Pretty good. Can't wait for part 2.

Posted on November 22, 2005
- RockOutStudios

Pretty good action film. Decent story. Just felt the ending was a little sudden, as there was no real indication that they ahd killed her till we saw the guy crying at her coffin. Apart from that, pretty solid. The next part should be interesting.

Posted on November 19, 2005
- TomServo3k

Hey not bad action, little vague though. Wasnt sure that they killed her. Decently subtitled and over all well edited. Some of the text went too long on some frames though, and tended to throw off the dialogue but over all pretty good.

Posted on November 19, 2005
- flabby08

Good. Sets up a larger story real well, building motive for some mayhem in the sequel. However we did not see her get killed, you focused more on the actual robbery being the climax of the bank-scene, while for the story her murder would be pivotal and should be focused on in stead. The robbery is context, the murder is the dramatic point.

Posted on November 17, 2005
- maxzilla2005

Make it longer, and you may have a hit.

Posted on November 17, 2005
- RapidDry

Whens part two coming out.

Story.... 4 Above average. predictable but draws you in.
Editing.. 4 No error detected. Above average.
Voices... 4 No viocing but not missed much here. Small hit.
Sounds... 3 Average.
Lean..... 4 Easy to like, if not to short.

Final rating... 3.8 Just short of a four..but no bump here.

Posted on November 17, 2005
- VARDER_KIFTEN

not bad, enjoyable though short

Posted on November 17, 2005
- PierrePiper

good film fours stars plus one as its your first effort.

if you get chance review my film please

http://movies.lionhead.com/movie/7722

Posted on November 17, 2005
- chaotix66

good work on editng, music flows real well and a decent story drives it through

Posted on November 17, 2005
- hendrix2222

Pretty darn good, sets up well for subsequent films. No voice, and some minor scene problems, but great just the same.

Posted on November 16, 2005