bothers in arms
Studio: callywally91
Review Count: 5
Average Rating: 3.0 stars
Genre: Action
Length: 2 minutes 16 seconds
Posted on: November 13, 2005
Film Description
this is an action packed film with a nice dose of comady with a twist at the end
- jamespetts

Your dialogue is so mis-spelt that it doesn't even make sense.

Posted on November 13, 2005
- camfromthecity21

Upload a thumbnail along with your movie. A picture says a 1000 words.

Posted on November 13, 2005
- tomsten

best film ever

Posted on November 13, 2005
- Yfopla


its not bad...but nothing like what it should be. Heres the main problems with this:
- You Used black text with a black background
- bothers?
- some spelling errors in the text
- dosent clarify whos talking
- he asked "How do i get home?" Then in the next shot, hes in town getting revenge
- How did the hero know where the others were? Didnt really clarify on that...

You just needed to have spent more time on this, making sure the storyline makes sense. But as it is now, it hardly makes any sense.

I really liked the ending though. Not funny, but clever. Very celever actually...

Anyways, just put in more time and work on creating the storyline. But good job.

Posted on November 13, 2005
- francois06000

No comment

Posted on November 13, 2005