bothers in arms
Review Count: 5
Average Rating: 3.0 stars
Length: 2 minutes 16 seconds
Posted on: November 13, 2005
this is an action packed film with a nice dose of comady with a twist at the end
its not bad...but nothing like what it should be. Heres the main problems with this:
- You Used black text with a black background
- some spelling errors in the text
- dosent clarify whos talking
- he asked "How do i get home?" Then in the next shot, hes in town getting revenge
- How did the hero know where the others were? Didnt really clarify on that...
You just needed to have spent more time on this, making sure the storyline makes sense. But as it is now, it hardly makes any sense.
I really liked the ending though. Not funny, but clever. Very celever actually...
Anyways, just put in more time and work on creating the storyline. But good job.
Posted on November 13, 2005