Whip Toby Square
 
 
Studio: Vestax159
 
Review Count: 26
Average Rating: 2.96 stars
Genre: Comedy
Length: 3 minutes 25 seconds
 
Posted on: November 9, 2005
 
 
Film Description
Wow Thnx for the feedback!! Any tips? Problems i had was setting up the extras i assumed they would all be in western but i was wrong (intro has a military looking guys)

The guy he was carrying out was his buddy that he came in with and he was again seen in the saloon saying he was alright (hey he was hit with a shotgun but its a movie right? plus the guy was stabbed and got back up haha!)
 
Reviews
- DayeWilliams

it was ok, i dont kno wat waz funny about it rather than the music (that was Honky Tonk) it had some good action but u shouldnt classify under comedy with all that scrapin', ya dig?
Anywaye watch my movies, jus' click my hyphen> DayeWilliams

Posted on July 16, 2006
- youngsteve

Lot of positives in this quite respectable western story. Could have done with more explanation of what was going on, with either speech or subtitles, & was spoiled somewhat by the coming back from the dead & stab him in the head scene, which seems to appear constantly. All in all though a good effort, & the author at least knows how to put together some sort of story.

Posted on November 13, 2005
- 666LUCIFER666

its ok...
nice work

Posted on November 10, 2005
- lachieboy

pretty good from 1939

Posted on November 10, 2005
- woolitz

THis was a good movie. I liked the knife part. A lot of action and good use of sound.

Posted on November 9, 2005
- Granman

Fairly cliche at this point but I'm glad to see that you've been able to tell parts of the story with out using dialoge. It seems that over stateing the plot with needless dialoge can detract from the story as much as add to it. Please... stop using that damn knife in the eye shot... its getting OLD.

Posted on November 9, 2005
- King_Moonracer

Nice.

Posted on November 9, 2005
- Onehrphotographer

Some elements a plot are here, mind you none are terribly original. Definitely lost your focus towards the end. Since when is stabbing and shooting funny? Sorry, this film would have been better categorized as an action/western than a comedy. Your scenes did mesh together smoothly, and I feel you are capable of more, I would suggest finding that original idea, put into a more structured script and you'll have a fantasic film on your hands.

Posted on November 9, 2005
- ohtastyone

No comment

Posted on November 9, 2005
- ParkCarsHere

Very good movie... much better then a lot of the things I've seen on here so far (not saying much, but it's the thought that counts I guess). Sure, we've all seen the knife scene many times, but most of the times it's been used totally out of context. In this movie it actually makes sense to have it... the scenes flowed smoothly together, except for towards the end... I kind of lost where you were going with it, but overall it was a great movie.

Posted on November 9, 2005
- shaunno

Lost my interest after the first minute. Wasnt this supposed to be a comedy?

Posted on November 9, 2005
- dimsey

Firstly, I thought it was great. It could've been made perfect with some dialogue, but the movie was not lost on me without it. It was fine.
Secondly, to fellow reviewers.
Don't hold the movie at fault for using scenes (such as the knife scene) that has been used in other movies. This isn't the makers fault.
Theres going to be repitition, you just have to take it in stride.
I can understand seeing the same scenes over and over becoming dull after awhile, but theres limitations to take into account. We can't blame the movie maker nor The Movies for that. We knew this from the start.

Anyway, I'll stop there with my ranting. Great movie.

Posted on November 9, 2005
- Super_soulb

Nice one , looks way better than mine :/

Posted on November 9, 2005
- ActionRocks

Great Flick

Posted on November 9, 2005
- Sup3rPh1y

It started out strong then lost steam about halfway thru. The bank robbery and [wash your mouth out!] house are pretty straight forward, but who everyone was and their relationships to one another are all up in the air.

Posted on November 9, 2005
- [oh please!]oosty

Good movie, however the bank robbery scene and person getting up after being stabbed is getting really old.

Posted on November 9, 2005
- ojdidntdoit6

Good first movie, solid on all elements.

Posted on November 9, 2005
- HyperGnome

Well, we're getting somewhere now =)

Posted on November 9, 2005
- Goopynose

knife in the face thing is gettn old fast. however i got through the hole thing so ill give the garbage a 2.

Posted on November 9, 2005
- Orgull

No comment

Posted on November 9, 2005
- CyberOps

nice job on your first movie

Posted on November 9, 2005
- WiLdCat

No comment

Posted on November 9, 2005
- Alpha-Omega

Decent work. I think you could have done better.

Posted on November 9, 2005
- Alastor3

hum the voice of the girl in blue is sooo boring ^^ but its a great movie for your first

Posted on November 9, 2005
- Woody

Wasn't bad. But I was wondering where he dumped the body of the guys from the bank. :)

Posted on November 9, 2005
- Tenshi_24

No comment

Posted on November 9, 2005